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@dekreel okay, I love action too! fight scenes galore!!!

heehee, thank you, me too! I enjoyed getting unique names like, Jada, Keegan, Axel, Bentlix, Trex, Aubrina, and such…

@seekjustice okay, got it! is there a specific date you would like it back by? I’m actually still on Christmas break, so I’m not sure how much will get done in the next week (spendin’ time with the family, ya know). But when school starts again I’ll be able to read more.

@jenwriter17  It sounds fine! Just be sure there’s a bit of action. I love action 😉

Also I LOVE the name Taegan!!!

@allison-grace

I’ll do my best to answer this.

First, what I know the bible has to say about this.

The bible does condemn those who despise authority (2 Peter 2:10).

It also says, “honor to whom honor is due.” (Romans 3:17)

I am not aware of anywhere in the bible that directly says children need to be submissive to adults other than their…[Read more]

Yay! Thanks so much everyone! 😀

@seekjustice thank you! i was afraid it might be a bit common too. i’ll have to keep brainstorming!

@itisastarrynight no worries!

(Also, I’m confused about your signature? What on earth does it mean?)

@epicaddie2 Heyo! Nice to meet you. I am right-handed, though sometimes I’ve been told I do a few things how a left-handed person would do it. Currently I don’t play any instruments, but I used to play the piano and have dabbled in the guitar and Irish whistle. I did read on Ranger’s Apprentice book. It was The Icebound Land, unless I’m very much…[Read more]

@notawriter

These two videos are done by the same person, and while they are good they are also quite long. Keep in mind that you don’t have to use a drawing tablet. As long as you’ve got the drawing program on your computer it will work. I’ve only…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 it sounds pretty good. the premise is a fairly common one, so maybe you could try twisting it in some way, adding a really good plot twist that the reader won’t see coming, such as making the villain less obvious, or making it one of the guardians themselves, or even her mentor. A few twists on this idea, I think, would make a really…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Google Docs is pretty simple. Clicking the link will take you to the first part of the novel, I’ll post the links for the second and third part in a minute. Above the doc there’ll be a bar which looks like the bar on this forum and towards the end there is an icon which has a little speech bubble with a plus sign. That’s the comment…[Read more]

@seekjustice i think google docs is fine, though i’ve never used it before. anything i need to know about it? and just so i know and everything’s clear in my mind, what kind of critique are you wanting?

I’m so excited!!!

@dragon-snapper

oops, sorry! i just realized you said you have enough readers…..well, i’ll be available for future novels 😁

@dragon-snapper

*raises hand nearly popping arm out of socket* ooh! ooh! If there’s still a reader slot open, I’d LOVE to read it! Congrats on finishing it! 😉

btw, I checked out your blog. it’s looks great and i look forward to posts in the future 😉

@skredder
That would be lovely 🙂 thanks!

@notawriter If you ever want, I can recommend a few YouTube videos that helped me tremendously when it came to digital art environments.

@that_writer_girl_99  Can I just say…wowza!!!!!

I love those.

So much.

@allison-grace  I am back from the dead (aka Christmas break)!  This question is for a more experienced writer than myself, but I definitely agree with what @that_writer_girl_99 said about making it real.  Sorry, I know I’m not very helpful, but honestly this is tough for me too!