Ariel Ashira

@lightningmouse  Hello! Your story sounds super intriguing, and I would read it. I like how you have a twist on the otherwise stereotypical “rebellious royal” and how you gave Rafe a superpower. That said, your synopsis is rather long.

personally, I would use a different word for your government. maybe Imperium from the Latin word for power? The…[Read more]

@lightningmouse I love vigilantes, so it sounds really interesting to me.  (I also love the name Rafe, but that is kind of irrelevant.) 🙂

The synopsis is a little long to put on the back of a book, though I have seen some pretty long book-back synopses.  I can’t tell you about saying the same thing in fewer words because I have the tendency to u…[Read more]

@dekreel Lol, this happens to me a lot! I’m about to tell a family member that I’m struggling with on-the-nose writing until I remember, “Hmm, they may or may not know what I’m talking about.” It’s nice to talk to other writers. We get each other’s language. 😉

@dekreel @alia thank you both! 😊

@alia No, I don’t think we have. *offers hand for handshake* I’m Jenwriter17, a fan of superhero, Star Wars, and martial arts movies, manga style drawing, historical, contemporary, sci-fi, and fantasy writer, lover of horses, and eater of chocolate. 😜

@lightningmouse  Mm-HMM 😀

What genre is it? The title sounds like fantasy, but the synopsis sounds like modern or something…

@jenwriter17 Heheh, that’s funny 😀

That’s a good idea!

Okay, this isn’t exactly as funny as yours, but one time I was talking to my aunt about writing, using terms like plotting, themes and character arcs. I didn’t know, until she asked, that she had no idea what a “character arc” was. I had assumed everyone knew the answer XD

@valtmy,

do you watch any of the historical ones? My favorite is Dae Janguem. its a romance about the first woman doctor to the king.

I’m not scared of you, just don’t think its safe to have two power hungry manipulative planners in close proximity. likely as not you’ll leave us all alone, but on the off chance that you two start a revolution…[Read more]

@valtmy FINALLY SOMEONE WHO HAS SEEN STUDIO GHIBLI!!

Which ones have you seen? I have seen Spirited Away, Totoro, Ponyo, Laputa, The Cat Returns, Porco Rosso, From Up on Poppy Hill, Nausicaa, Kiki’s Delivery Service, The Wind Rises, and Arrietty. Laputa is my favorite.

What’s your favorite part of Spirited Away? I can’t pick a favorite part

@jenwriter17

Go to your profile page

Click the button under your picture that says “Profile”

Click the “Edit” button

There is a box there that says “Forum Signature.”

Type your message there 🙂 (Can only be 100 or so characters long)

@emma-flournoy

Yes, I think there is something about writing and the joy of creation that draws certain personality types more than others!

@notawriter

Glad you like my story idea! My imagination tends to go towards the crazy when giving me ideas. I guess I just wanted to write a strong female protagonist without it becoming a typical “I can…[Read more]

@jenwriter17, hey, I don’t believe we’ve met.

anyways, onto your question. go to your profile, click profile, click edit and you should find a box for you to put in your signature. It’ll be right under your name.

Hope this helps

Hi, @lightningmouse! I’m glad you’re back! I’m always glad when a long-gone Kapeefer finds his/her way back here 😀

Sounds interesting! So does Rafe want to start a revolution against the government? Is he a part of the government?

I think I would read it 🙂

@mnvalentine

Instrumentals. Scores and soundtracks from films and musicals mostly.

@alia

I usually watch romantic comedies and fusion sagueks. So Korean dramas like Princess Hours, Sungkyunkwan Scandal etc.

Aww… There’s no need to be afraid of us INTJs! We are like cacti; intimidating, tough and resilient on the outside but actually being…[Read more]

@mariposa Ooohh… Cool. Are they trainable? 😁 (It’s fine if they aren’t)

@Dragon-snapper Ahhhhh… That quote. XD

@daughteroftheking *whispers* Yeah I have my favorite too. I like hiding her in my other stories, while I wait to write her’s. *cough* Cori looks cool.

@introvert_girl *gasps* I DIDN’T RESPOND TO YOU EITHER! Ugh, I was a very bad responder in the beginning.

Fave books: ones by Chuck Black, Robert Trekillard, Douglas Bond, and C. R. Hedgcock. Fave shows: old shows like Bonanza, Andy Griffith show, Dick Van Dyke show, The Big Valley, Gunsmoke, The Rifleman. Fave movies: the Marvel movies, Karate…[Read more]

@perfectfifths Kay would never have her birthday again. (She thinks that in theory she would age then, thus giving her move time to search. And she would feel sorry for the groundhog having to poke out of his hole in the morning only to be stared at until he looked at his shadow or not.)

@aviantrail Kay would go for the porridge. She may be…[Read more]

@valtmy WELCOME!!! I know you’re gonna love it here! 😊

I like reading and listening to music too. What are your favorite books/authors? Favorite music to listen to? My brother likes to watch anime too; which ones do you watch? I don’t watch anime myself, but I’ve always loved the manga style art. If you’re interested in art, I actually have a…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper OH MY GOODNESS I REALIZE I NEEEEVER RESPONDED TO YOUR GREETING!!!!!!! *hangs head in shame after kicking self* I am so sorry. I figured I’d just answer your questions anyway, even though you might already know the answer.

I don’t think I could pick one favorite book, but I love the books by Chuck Black, Robert Trekillard, and C.…[Read more]