Ariel Ashira

@kaya-young Sorry I didn’t get back when I planned.  I got tied up. But I hope you’ll be a frequenter of this topic from now on!

That does sound interesting.  One of the things I like best about sci-fi is when it’s well thought out and researched.  In one of the Tom Swift Jr. books Tom makes a zero gravity machine by making a huge box with di…[Read more]

@itisastarrynight

Is Jenna yourself, or one of your OC s?

I just now saw this question… Nope, it’s an OC. Not me 🙂

Well I must bid you all adieu. I hope the rest of your writing goes well! Good night!

@rochellaine wow, thank you! I’m glad your sister liked it too. 🙂 (I may be hooked on writing poems now. Rochellaine, what have you done to me?)

I dunno maybe Charlie just rocked the dance floor with the octopi 😉 🙂

@rochellaine   Well… The other day I was reading about electric fields, and I thought “what if I could use that in my WIP?” So I googled what would happen if we had a much stronger magnetic field, and something said that we could fly. I really don’t think that was based on scientific evidence, but it gave me a story idea: what if there was a w…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking well, the helichrysum oil actually helps to build tissue (but I’m not sure exactly what kind of problem you’re having). The comfrey salve just heals things generally. But you can’t apply it to an open wound or a surgery wound. I think it helps with broken bones too. my brother used it on his broke toe. But if you’re going to…[Read more]

@seekjustice  CONFETTI CANNON!

@rochellaine  @kaya-young  @jenwriter17  @anyone

I’m editing!

@seekjustice Congratulations! 😀 😀

Thanks, and hope to see you again by Monday! (that means Tuesday, in Australia, though.) 🙂

@kaya-young Cool!  Glad you finally joined us here.  It’s a lot of fun.  I’ll be dropping out for about half an hour and then I’ll be back.  If you’re still here later I’ll see you.  What are you working on?

@kaya-young  *blinks away tears*  That’s such a beautiful song! Wow… It’s amazing. Thanks for sharing it! 😉

@kaya-young ooh you’re right! Maybe that’s a sign that I’m too obsessed with KP forums 😛

(And this is my 800th post).

@seekjustice  *Gasps* You are about to have posted 800 times!!!

@rochellaine  I’m here now! Nope, you read that right! I’ve never been in Writer’s Corner before, I didn’t really know how it worked, so I just didn’t really pay much attention to it. :/

@rochellaine

Yep, and I’m not sure if I’ll get much writing time tomorrow either. But I wish you the best of like in your writing! Especially with your his-fic!

Wow, @dekreel . I can really relate to this. You know, KP is such an amazing place, full of encouraging people. But it can also be used against us when we fall into comparison- which I did without even realizing it. I started to think things like “you shouldn’t even be on this website, you’re not a real writer like they are” and “why do you even…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking 😀 😀 Someone should write an argumental dialogue between a person and her (personified) Sanity.  At the end Sanity decides it isn’t appreciated and leaves, and the the person can’t do anything anymore and has to beg it to come back…

@kaya-young You’ve never been on the Writers’ Corner before???

Or did I read that wrong? 🙂  I have been known to do that…

@kaya-young That’s exactly how it works. 😀  I wasn’t here when you posted, and I’m sure you left long ago, but I’m here now.

You can either just announce that you’re writing and hope someone is around to see it and join you, or you can get to know who is around at what time, or check the list of who is active on the forum and tag people to ask…[Read more]

Ok, thanks @rochellaine ! That’s something I really hadn’t thought about before @daeus said it, and I do see where that would be helpful.

@reaganramm  I just watched the video.

I… I didn’t know you did this for me!! X’D   BTW, it’s pronounced DEE-kreel XD (see signature)

Anyway, thanks SO much for the video! It was really good advice 😀

@kaya-young I didn’t really see anything you did badly in the passages you have there, but I do like what @daeus said about defining your characters.

Each character should have a slightly different voice.  So, whereas one person says “I don’t know,” maybe the second person doesn’t like contractions, and says “I do not know.”  (I have a sister w…[Read more]