Ariel Ashira

@filewriterbase13x

Nice!
Daeus walking his turtles was amazing. *Chuckles* 😀

@filewriterbase13x :O :O The Raspberry Sun!!!!

Awesome episode 😛

I really like Ezi

@filewriterbase13x That was cool! What happened to the raspberry sun? That is truly concerning! 🙂

@that_writer_girl_99 and @daeus    Sorry I guess I didn’t tag you.

A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

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The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part two: Of Kings and of Turtles

When I saw what had knocked me down I laughed. The beast knocked me down again, playfully. It was Ezi. My pet Griffin.

“Okay, okay. I missed you too. Now. Get. Off. Me.” I laughed. He was too heavy to still be…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Okaay, I know that… 🙂  But how exactly does that give you my email?

Just wondering, of course.

@catwing and @valtmy  Thank you both!

@ariel-ashira I’m in Eastern time, so an hour ahead of you.

Um, how did you get my email? 😉

@ariel-ashira What time zone do you live in? 🙂  Oh, and I meant to reply earlier…please do give me any comments you have on my story!  I won’t be hurt or offended or anything.  I’d just be sorry if you were too worried about that to comment.  I would love to have your true opinion!

So…what have you got? 😛

@rochellaine

Whoops, that first paragraph was supposed to state that I had never felt insecure about my height. 😛

@rochellaine

Yeah, that’s me in a nutshell, except I’ve never felt insecure in my life (at least, I didn’t until the boys I used to wrestle with and tease because one of them was shorter than me, shot up and towered above me). And yes, I’ve also got a lot more confident as I’ve grown up and forced myself out of my comfort zone. But I used to be…[Read more]

@seekjustice Thank you for your comments! 🙂  I totally understand what you’re saying, and you’re actually right in what I should be writing.

My problem is this:  Chara is me. 😛

More correctly, she is me – but two years ago, when I was still insecure about my height and really wouldn’t do anything on my own.  I’ve grown up considerably since th…[Read more]

So, if anyone’s here I am writing for about the next twenty minutes.

@rochellaine

OK I’ve requested access! 🙂

@rochellaine

So, I’ve been reading through your novel and I’m really liking it so far. I’ve read a couple of the comments the other guys have made on here as well, but I haven’t read all of them, so my apologies if this has already been said before.

I’ve been thinking about Chara’s disorientation and the way she isn’t confident about being able…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Aaaah, I see.
I’m scared. *cocks head*

*shrugs* We know you didn’t mean it. They’re nice poems.
Look, in life you’re bound to offend people. Even if you try not to. You make up, you learn. Sometimes afterward you learn more about each other.
And you don’t know what offends people until you (or someone else) offends them (or they…[Read more]

@dekreel

I think the others have already given some very good responses so these are just my two cents:

#1: Think of other reasons for your bully to torment people apart from the cliche weakness, jealous or insecurity. For example, some usually nice people that I know unintentionally become bullies when a new person intrudes on the comfortable…[Read more]

@ingridrd

I’m praying for you!