Ariel Ashira

@alia I’m working on my dystopian WIP, reading for Skredder, getting distracted by Youtube and Pinterest 😛

@jenwriter17, I’m trying to finish chapter five of my book. and write the blog post for this week. what about you?

@alia I’ve been there done that with computer problems 🙂

what are you working on?

@jenwriter17, I’m still here. my computer is having problems so if I disappear its probably because of that

@alia Yes! Are you still on?

@seekjustice Thanks so much for your advice, it makes sense. I’ll try to focus more on what my story needs instead of what I want 😀

@jenwriter17

you writing?

@jenwriter17

Sorry its taken me so long to get back to you! Basically I think everyone else here is right, complexity is pretty much what makes long novels long.

Having said that, my novels tend to be on the shorter side. I love writing novellas and flash fiction and the longest novel I’ve ever written was only 100,000 words (not short, but not…[Read more]

@skredder Cool! I should be able to read it all tonight 🙂

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Here’s part 11. It’s also a bit longer.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YowoswRsOTRd1jEAmLFf9RzYV3Hpczt6uwDcX_iR20E/edit?usp=sharing

@jenwriter17  OH, gotcha!  I totally get it.  Thanks for your willingness.  🙂

@ingridrd I’d be glad to critique this 🙂

But, y’all, this’ll be my last critique/beta/alpha reading job for a while. The upcoming months are going to be pretty busy (a few trips out of town, getting my WIP ready for an editor at Realm Makers, my equestrian team season starting, beginning a blog). I’ll finished reading for @skredder and @seekjusti…[Read more]

@warrenluther04 aw I won’t be going to California this year (actually, probably not until 2019 or 2020 🙁 )

How was your hiatus? 🙂

There is some shuffling, then more silence.

“Brek, what—?”

The door bursts open.

@alia

Okay! see you later 🙂

@seekjustice, so far yeah. I only got to the wedding though. then the computer crashed.

well, I have to go now.

@sam-kowal You actually counted the number of turtles in Daeus’ signature? Impressive! 😀

And @mnvalentine , I’m sorry I’m getting back so late: I was on hiatus. 😐

@mnvalentine I cannot read it as of right now because I have to go, but I just wanted to tell you that I’ll beta-read the first chapter for you and get back to you on this. 🙂 If I’m writing tomorrow, which I hope to be, I’ll read it. 😀 But I liked the newspaper magazine article you included!