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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano I got them. I cant wait to read them!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano That would be great! My email is imexinart@gmail.com and make sure to let me know who you are in the subject line.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
😀 I was going to send you a friend request. You beat me to it! @livgiordano
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LivGiordano and Ariel Ashira are now friends 6 years, 7 months ago
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano Yes, please post more!! It really has helped me. I memorized it. I think of it all the time. And good job getting @filewriterbase13x to join. She’s been awesome! Did you read The Light Triumphs? Its the first I have submitted to KP, but you might enjoy it.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano Oh my goodness! WOW! Let me tell you that is one of my FAVORITE poems on planet earth!!! I love it! And it came at a time in my life when I really needed that. (It was before I joined KP.) Yeah, it was so awesome I wrote it it my diary. And I wanna hang it on the wall. Its so beautiful!!!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@livgiordano Are you the one who wrote the poem “Broken”!!!!????
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Okay, sure.
I think you were pretty detailed. You could describe the room and the people’s faces a little more.
I have a good idea of the guy. His face is not clear in my mind though.
The emotion was good. It wouldn’t be bad if there was more though. A few words describing it a little more would help.
I would def…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x I like it! Its really good! I think its well balanced with the things you mentioned. What era is it? Modern?
Do you and livgiordano know eachother?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Whoops! I wish I could help you finish the dishes so you can come sooner…
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Are you working on your western?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Im on for an unknown amount of time. Might have to go shortly. Working on characters for The Crimson Cup.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Could you guys pray for the relationships in our family and extended family please? Can’t go in to specifics, but I would sure appreciate it.
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Ariel Ashira and The fledgling Artist are now friends 6 years, 7 months ago
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@valtmy Praying!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Sorry, I have to go now. 🙁
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose 🙂 Okay. Thats what I figured.
@filewriterbase13x No problem! I get the whole family rules thing!
@skredder I am working on “The Crimson Cup”.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose What does it mean to be an aussie?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose I am in Missouri. Its 6:44 right now. @skredder Where are you at?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose Do you live in Australia?
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