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@kydonandwillow

Yay! (sorry this is late… heh heh)

Reading it now… 😁

@hybridlore

Thanks lol

@hybridlore

Hopefully that never happens 😬😅

I like your new signature, btw.

You guys are worrying me 😅 are the chances of KP breaking down, like, high?

@kydonandwillow

Oh, I didn’t see your reply to grcr 😅 lag.

@kydonandwillow

Ok, I see. 😄

@kydonandwillow

I love it!! Onnnneeeee thing that stood out to me was this line (and please take my comments with a grain of salt):

He thought of his sister’s gentle, quiet spirit, and his restless, fiery one and shook his head. Sometimes he didn’t believe that they were related.

There’s nothing inherently wrong with it, but it’s kind of going a…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

Hi there!

I like it so far. I love the how you wrote it. I thought the part where he put the nightgown in the oven was funny…😄

I’m not fully qualified for editing, but I did have one question….

Is Kydon on his way to give the muffins in the first paragraph of the book? I was a bit confused… at first I thought he was…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Hey. I’m really sorry you’re having a hard time. I’ll be praying ❤️😔

@keilah-h

Oh. 😊

…mmm… thats very interesting.

@keilah-h

Oh, I see. …heh heh…

Which do you like better, dinosaurs or dragons?

@keilah-h

😊 …heh heh…

You’re welcome! 🙃 Do you like Jurassic World?

@keilah-h

Hi there!

Thanks! lol 😄

Cool character, too, by the way!

@lydibug

🙃 you’re welcome! 😁

@thearcaneaxiom

You’ve done it again… my brain is broken 😂

From what I understand, that sounds like a cool idea, though!

@jonas

Lol 😂😂😂

@jonas

Oh, yeah, oops. Yeah, that was the original name. It was far too similar to Voidbringer, which was not something I wanted XD.

Maybe I’ll do that…

I’ll add a couple tags.

And you guys feel free to ignore this if you’re not interested.

@whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin @euodia-vision @can’tthinkofanyoneelseatthemoment