ArcticAnimals

Kalary

“No clue where we are.” Kalary said, “What’s with the sword? Ordinary swords haven’t been practical in combat for centuries.”

@jonas

Kal’s got a gun.

@jonas

I could tell. Also,

killjoy 😒

I decided to try a wide board instead of a tall board…. so here that is…

The character is my beloved Brayden Gretchen (I know and I don’t care, so I’m using that girls name as a surname anyway). Brayden is one of Blaine Gretchen’s eight siblings. (I know you all don’t know who Blaine is yet… I think he’s the only MC in my story that I…[Read more]

Posy

The room would be searched at some point, and there were already people outside, and they didn’t seem to know each other.

She pushed the door open.

“Who’re all of you?” She asked quietly and so quickly the words seemed to form together.

She stood in the doorway, too anxious to step out, she changed her expression, trying to appear unafraid.

I’m gonna get an epic Jonas eyeroll for this one hehehe…

@jonas

Sorry, Dalton has been taken by the protection squad, where he will be supplied with copious amounts of tea and therapy.

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t have much to add, since I basically agree with Hybridlore and Jonas. Soo… yeah, other than the points mentioned, it looks good to me… 😄

You, not out. Idk how I did that.

@rae

What I’ve learned is that pretty much anything out can imagine is a name in some language 😅

@freedomwriter76

Poor guy…. 🥺💛

I love the quote about trust…

@freedomwriter76

Thanks!! 😊

(ApPaReNtLy I’vE aLrEaDy SaId ThAt… So It DiDn’T sEnD… lol) 

Kalary

Kalary looked around at the unfamiliar room. Faint voices emanated from somewhere on the other side of the door. She opened it a crack. Two people – or the approximation of, one of them seemed to be covered in metal – stood in the room beyond.

Kalary stepped out. “Hail.”

@trailblazer

Oh wow. And thank you so much. I think the hardest thing for us rn is that he won’t each much anyway, being a picky 3 year old. And he’s still trying to figure out his emotions, and he gets sooo angry when his sugar is high and sometimes my little sister eggs him on then I have no clue or way to fix it because he’s also yelling at me…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Oh wow. And thank you so much. I think the hardest thing for us rn is that he won’t each much anyway, being a picky 3 year old. And he’s still trying to figure out his emotions, and he gets sooo angry when his sugar is high and sometimes my little sister eggs him on then I have no clue or way to fix it because he’s also yelling at me…[Read more]

@rae

Okay.

Carrie

I quietly left the campfire deciding I couldn’t leave my brother there.

Just leave me alone… I thought it, but it was directed towards everyone at the campfire.

I found the spot where Silas was. He lay in the same place, I shook him a bit.

“Wake up.” I snapped quietly.

I shook him harder and he began to move a…[Read more]

@rae

That’s understandable. I could just try to write that Carrie tries sneaks past him without any distraction. Idk how that would play out.