ArcticAnimals

I’ll try.

@jonas

I haven’t, but I haven’t tried to edit anything recently.

@mineralizedwritings

I don’t really know… lol… I don’t think anything is known so we’ll probably have to make it up as we go…

@savannah_grace2009

Aww thanks 😊 He’s one of my favorite characters

@mineralizedwritings

😅 So… They’ve already done the dance… (I don’t know if they are going to continue any bit more…)

The Queen of Lillen (I think??) has told them that they have been transferred to the new universe/country/world… but she hasn’t said much else. The house has moved everyone already, and they are still trying to figure out…[Read more]

@trailblazer

lol 😅 yeah

Alright… my “minute” turned into quite a while… anyhow… Flaz is going to enter now….

Flaz

“Clothes and clothes and more clothes. Who, in the wondrous and ridiculous world of Extroit, has a wardrobe this large?” Flaz said loudly as he stepped out from under a rack in the basement. He made a weird sound as his round face brushed up…[Read more]

Alrighty, I’m adding my second character… My boy Flazzy (just forget his last name for now…)

Flaz is 15 years old and stands 5 foot tall. His jet-black hair is shaved on one side of his head, and it always looks shiny in the moonlight. He has sandy beige skin, a button nose, and naturally pinkish lips. His monolid eyes have a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Great! Thanks!

@savannah_grace2009

Hey do you mind if I keep Lane in the rp, but also add a second character?

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t mind if you do it… or I’ll do it if you don’t want too… I’m good with whatever….

@rae

Those are really cool!

@thearcaneaxiom

That’s fair. If it feels natural to you, than I’d say leave it, as long as it isn’t creating weird jarring breaks that throw the reader out of the story, which I don’t think it is, except for here:

You’re telling me.

Where I had to pause for a moment and reread it. I’m still not sure if I understand this line 😂…[Read more]

@rae

My, my! 😃 I really like the way you write.

@thearcaneaxiom

Sure. Let’s see…here, I found this paragraph especially confusing:

You’re telling me. I had more questions, but held my tongue because Thing’s current track record hasn’t been the most helpful for answering them, other than explaining my inability to eat.

And there were a couple other spots where it switches to present tense lik…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh, yes I did. After discussing some things with my brother, I decided I’m going to write about one of my warrior teams. Thanks for offering, though! 😄

@savannah_grace2009

Just popping in, I know I haven’t been very active on here…

Is 6 MC’s too many, or should I stick with my original 5?

It really depends. If Liv is going to be important enough to be an MC and if you can make each of their viewpoints interesting and make every character unique, I’d say go for it. I know GodlyFantasy has, li…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)

I didn’t notice that before, but I went back and looked, and yeah. I guess she’s not on the forum anymore?

Great chapter! The bounce between present and past tense was very confusing, though. Were the parts in p…[Read more]

I have soo many boards that I plan to share… (when they are fully finished)… 😆