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Rolena Hatfield started the topic A KeePer Announcement! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Hear ye, hear ye!
This announcement is to draw all of you wonderful KeePer’s attention to a few changes here on the forum.
Because we care about everyone of you, may I first bring your attention to our updated forum guidelines.
They’re simply more specific for the benefit of it’s users. For, what kingdom can flourish without a clear law to…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Hey people. *tips hat grinningly*
There’s this book I just read called Eats, Shoots and Leaves, by Lynn Truss. It’s non-fiction—about punctuation. But it’s not a long or dull read at all, and is funny and very informative/helpful. Especially for people like writers who’d use punctuation more than usual. 😉
The only objection would be: it has a…[Read more] -
Louise Fowler replied to the topic Homework for Video 4: Experiment in Living in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea Thanks! 😀 All the characters mentioned are actually main protagonists too, I’m only concentrating on this one because she’s my character in a co-writing project 🙂
Basically, character A (the main one I’m talking about) has been trained all her life and is prepared, mostly, for a long quest and battle. Compared to characters B and C,…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy kina-lamb @lifeofkatie (be sure to read the 1st one first) @jane-maree @ethryndal @aratrea @overcomer @audrey-caylin @jess @graciegirl @adry_grace @anne-swiftblade @christi-eaton @jadamae @jess @northerner @that_writer_girl_99 @perfectfifths @theliterarycrusader @hope @ingridrd @winter-rose @rolena-hatfield @cla…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eight: Flat Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 7 years, 5 months ago
Naw, thanks @jane-maree XD
Now I reckon it could seem awkward to say that I look up to my cousins, who have a super strong faith, which was partly what inspired me to take my faith more seriously! And yes, my mother, and granny. Granny is an amazing woman, and she is a great example of how I want to be when I’m 80! @aratrea -
Leumeister replied to the topic Aquila in the forum Sci-Fi 7 years, 5 months ago
Hello everybody tagged below!
I’ve got a bunch of unfinished drafts of stories (plus the finished draft for the Pilot for Aquila) and I was wondering if any of you would like to alpha-read some of them (and, perhaps, beta-read the finished draft). I need input on what I’m working on because I’ve got some stories I’m stuck on.
So, for those of…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea Thanks! I think in that picture of you and Christi, you could be siblings, that just resemble each other a lot. My siblings and I are like that.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea Rats. If I had known ‘coming along for the ride’ was an option, I’da come with Hope.
Could you tell me how to get on to your social medias besides Instagram? Do you have Facebook, and could I look at your Facebook without having Facebook myself?We pointed out how Hope is the only one who looks authentically dramatic, because she’s…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper *looks up butcher bird to make sure I got it right* Yeah, I think that’s it 😉 I think it was a young one, because it had more brown feathers (hence thinking it was a kookaburra, if you know what they look like)
Oh, cool! We don’t have woodpeckers here. At the very least, I’ve never seen one 😉
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic My Attempt in the forum Poetry 7 years, 5 months ago
Oh, and all of the Star Wars fans out there… my brother and I wrote a poem you’ll love.
A Poetic Discourse on the Unfairness of the Jedi Life
Don’t you find it quite unfair
That all the Jedi Masters
Live in giant deserts dry
And useless dusty pasturesAnakin and then young Luke
On Tattoine were found
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic My Attempt in the forum Poetry 7 years, 5 months ago
So, I read some of the poems y’all suggested. (I loved the Wreck of the Hesperus). And I tried one of my own. It’s a bit silly, and I don’t like the ‘magic’ and ‘tragic’ rhyme at all, but for lack of a better one, I left it. Maybe someone can help me change it? But how do you all like it?
The Faerie Child
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 7 years, 5 months ago
Hey there.
So.
My brother is an animator. A movie maker. And this summer he is venturing out on another project, and he has made me his co-collaborator or something like that. So he asked me to ask y’all about it and if you like it and stuff.
So… here’s the basic plot. I’m still a bit fuzzy on it and it may not be one hundred percent accurate,…[Read more] -
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@daeus @hope @corissa-maiden-of-praise @dragon-snapper @bluejay @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @aratrea @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @perfectfifths.
Right to left is Christi, then Josiah, then I dunno, then Daeus, then Hope, then Rolena, then I dunno. Sorry to the ‘dunno’ people if you see this. Please feel free to make yourself known.
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Daeus replied to the topic Anyone heard of ACFW or Wors Weavers? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@his-instrument Cool! I shall have to check these out.
(@aratrea You’ll have to add these to your list of potential partners.)
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 5 months ago
Oh, yes, sorry @aratrea! I’m known for bad phrasing.
Message#3- Everything you have must be sacrificed for justice, as long as it is not unjust to do so. -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Homework for Video 13: Theme & Antagonist in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea I had a question but now I can’t remember it. Figures.
Emolas: A friend of Liriel’s, and one of the few Sprites who is not blind to the corruption of his people. He does not agree with Liriel’s motive for wanting to defeat the Olgloin, believing that she would be better driven if she were doing it for the sake of the people, not just…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Homework for Video 5: Character Arc in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 5 months ago
@Aratrea I think the trilogy has an overarching theme of Sacrifice, but this particular one of the trilogy is judgement
Beginning: Protagonist is under the idea that justice must be served, and everything must be given to make things right. He is bitter with this thought of what it means in the case of his family. This devotion grows after his…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Discussion for Video Five: Character Arcs in the forum Discussion Questions 7 years, 5 months ago
Well, @Aratrea, I think I’m learning more here than I am at school!
People change when drastic things happen in their lives to force, insinuate or inspire change.
Past mistakes are the main cause of this, when someone messes up, they immediately move to try and not suffer the consequences again. Like when people train a dog not to bark by…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Homework for Video 4: Experiment in Living in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea
Okay, physical poetic justice for MC…
He aim to bring justice by not letting the villains steal his blood to overtake the universe, and in doing so allows his sister to get tortured, and therefore is left with guilt that he can not be freed from?
I’m not sure if that fits as the physical problem doesn’t happen directly to him… I…[Read more] - Load More