Josiah DeGraaf

@ingridrd @kaymart @catwing anyone else want to join too?

@rochellaine WHAT? YOU DIDN’T SHIP THEM?! GIRL, I WAS SHIPPING THEM SO HARD BY THE SECOND HALF!!!

@seekjustice We shall convince Rochellaine that Chessy and Justice should be a couple! 😉

I’m back by the way 🙂

@alia mm, that seems to be a pretty hard subject.

@alia yeah, sure 😉 what are you debating about, if you don’t mind me asking?

@seekjustice *fangirls again*

I’ll be back in about half an hour…

@rochellaine @seekjustice @skredder @kaya-young Anyone wanna write with me?

@skredder I love it!!!  Nice job!

@mnvalentine Thank you for sharing!  I do agree with Elizabeth and Skredder.  It is a little to dull and slow moving, even though its great for establishing some facts.  I like how you described the characters.  Now I am curious to read more. 🙂  I have terrible times with my first chapters too.  So exiting you are so close to publishing!

@seekjustice I finished it! (I pushed off my to do list to finish it because I couldn’t stop 😉 )

I love this so much already! It feels so good to read about these characters again, and I love how Chessy and Justice’s relationship has gotten.

But, uh…………

CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRR!

I am so looking forward to the next part!!! 😀

@skredder ooh, now you’re getting me excited! 😀

@rochellaine lol, your meme is very accurate! 😀

bad girl, @seekjustice, bad girl! Your readers are weeping oceans and you just say we “should have learnt by now”?!

😛

I’m on page 11 right now. Awesomeness so far 😉 I should finish it within the next hour, cuz I had a few other things to take care of (ahem, like my broken heart). 😉

@Dekreel woohooo I love it! *tosses confetti* xP

@SeekJustice @Sam-kowal I’ve actually already got a cabin (plus several other offers, haha) so I’m all good, thanks though! Have fun with the Kapeefer cabin!

@skredder Okay, will do! 🙂

My answers to your questions:

1) I really enjoy the family, so I would keep reading.

2) I think the first line was good because it establishes very soon the close relationship of the family and the lifestyle.

3) So far, I think the characters are consistent 🙂

4) Yup! 😀

It is, definitely. You’ll get it right, though, I know it. 😉

@skredder I read it! I still love this family 🙂 …..

There were only a few little things I commented on. I saw you said that it was supposed to be in Casse’s POV, which I didn’t know; I thought you were doing omniscient POV. I would suggest more following Casse’s action and her thoughts to make it her POV.

I’m looking forward to the next part! 😀

*sighs*

I hate to say it, but I think your friend was right.

It’s not a bad thing, necessarily. The chapter introduced the family dynamic, and introduces a few things that will (obviously) come into play later in the story, but it doesn’t have a whole lot of oomph–by which I mean, something that draws the reader into the story. There’s…[Read more]

@skredder I’m ready for it any time you’re ready to give it  😉

@seekjustice Yay! I can’t wait to read it! I requested access 🙂