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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Okay, here’s one:
That laugh. It shook Rin’s core and made her shudder. Her ears tingled and her eyes squeezed shut.
Enough.
Rin flung an arm out. Her fist hit Takara full on the cheek.
Takara stumbled back and the soldiers grabbed Rin’s arms. Takara steadied herself and gingerly felt her face. It was already red. “How d…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Hi, guys! I can’t be on long, but maybe for a little if were talking about anything. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine We can do anything between a couple sentences to a paragraph if you want. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you! Yeah, his sister was five when he left, and she hardly remembers him. Also, because of the traumatizing situation they were in for a while when he was taken away, she has hardly spoken for those two years. My poor little character!
I find it tons of fun, but also difficult to write these very emotional scenes. I enj…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine haha “course of” that’s cute! 😉
Yup, my dystopian. 🙂
you wanna share snippets of our WIPs? it’s okay if you don’t want to.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine I think I can be on for a while 🙂 Working on your western?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia Well if it’s in God’s will, He’ll definitely make a way somehow. 🙂 I’ll be praying.
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Ariel Ashira started the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 6 months ago
Okay, so I have this scene I need some help with. My MC is an eighteen year old guy who is returning home after not being able to see his family for two years. His family has thought him dead for over a year. What would these peoples responses be when he shows up one night: his Father, his Mother, his ten year old brother, and the elderly se…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia @jenwriter17 @rochellaine I really wish I could be on more, but life won’t allow that yet. Just thought I’d say it is something to celebrate that poor Uncle Bill has been found! 🙂
Please, though, don’t hesitate to tag me. I will be on as often as I can!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia Am praying for you!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia @rochellaine And Rochellaine is the winner! 😉
Rochellaine you know you’re not supposed to google while doing a word war! but i know, it’s likely I would’ve done the same thing. 😉
I have to go now. Thanks for the word war! <3 <3
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia @rochellaine whoo, that was bad. 218.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia @rochellaine All good on ten minutes? I’m gonna start then 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia Oh, welcome back! ten minutes sounds good to me
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine maybe we can fit in two word wars, one now and another when Alia gets back. is seven minutes okay?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia okay, I hope I’ll still be here by then, cuz I’m gonna have to go soon too….
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
@skredder @seekjustice Well, I’ve got chapter 5 here! 🙂
I have a couple questions though: 1) do you like Jax’s POV enough to have more of it? 2) originally my story was set in Japan, so most if not all of the characters’ names are Japanese. Do you think I should change this now that it’s set in…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia YES WORD WARRRRRR!
@rochellaine um, yes, you might want to do that 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia 😀 😀 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia haha, yeah, I understand. I don’t have many writer friends where I live, so I’m not used to seeing/hearing someone say writer stuff 😉
We’re cruel aren’t we? *strokes cat as I sit in evil chair* *smirks*
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