Josiah DeGraaf

Thanks, Daeus! I’ll check it out.

Haha, K.M. Weiland’s site is one of my favorite writing sites on the internet, so good choice! 😉 I appreciate it!

My assorted thoughts on this piece:
-As I said in my critique, the humor in this story is great and is still great this time around. Thumbs up from me for that.
-I second most of what other people have already said about the debit card and ticks.
-I really liked the parallels you were drawing between Anna and Savanna in terms of the spectrum…[Read more]

The fact that he doesn’t hear whether or not she’s dead or alive before this letter, and doesn’t even try to find out, strikes me as odd, but I guess I could see a bully-type character being too embarrassed to do that and such. Anyways, onto the actual request, I’m going to try to put myself in the position of this character. Assuming that he…[Read more]

Thanks for your help, everyone! Your thoughts are helpful for us as we figure out what we’re doing with our to-be-revealed special project! 🙂

Some of these questions have been answered already, but essentially the original concept of Kingdom Cinema died because of a lack of submissions. I’ve kind of re-branded aspects of it in starting up my writing advice video series that airs once a month, but we are still open to submissions.