Aranel

@ellette-giselle

I wouldn’t say bland . Bland is too extreme for Aaron.

I just can’t see much of his character right now.

@ellette-giselle

I will find a way…😎😜

@grcr

heyyy girl! How are you doing?!?!

@ellette-giselle

YOU JUST ADMITTED TO A CRIME….

*pulls out handcuffs*

@theducktator

I’m down!!!

We just need more people lollll

You don’t have to do a “ship”

UM YES HE DOES

jk jk lol

@keilah-h

Aww tysm! As a new worldbuilder this means a lot 💕💕

You guys…I need to have “Does that make sense?” as my signature XD XD

@ellette-giselle

Sooo, I’ll have to see what you think, but I’ve been told by my beta readers that the first half of the book is about the situation Aaron is in, and the second half is about HIM personally. The first half sets the stage, the second half goes deep into the character. so, You’ll have to tell me what you think.

Personally, I don’t…[Read more]

I shall attempt to give advice in the best way possible. lol.

but it’s definitely out of my comfort zone!!!

Oh and about the names…

i’m soooo bad at names.

I literally just googled:

last names that mean water, plants, pain, etc.

So yeah. I know I’m a terrible worldbuilder and that should be a crime…but it works lol

@linus-smallprint

Main Ship is like the main “couple” or romance. Even if neither of them fall in love…if people are “shipping” two of your characters together that means that they are rooting for your characters to fall in love.

So even if neither of them actually are a “thing”, the main ship could be the two characters that your readers seem…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

No, Eloy and Cassian are full brothers (idk if I said that right lol). They have the same mother and father– mother is Indie and father is Azazel. Lilitu was adopted, because his parents were Jraldath and Selena (AKA Kaden and Sevryn from the Prologue). The reason Lilitu isn’t part Pythonos is that he was born before his…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks, that makes me feel a little better 🙃😁😅😄

I’m 21. The other guy is 20

Ohhh that explains why your writing’s so good!!!! It all makes sense now!!! lol

I’m only 14…and it makes me mad when my writing’s not as good as older writers’…but then I have to slow down and remember that I’m doing good for the age I’m at and I h…[Read more]

Okay, after reading this through again, I don’t think I’m the best person to give you critiques on this book.

You see, I’m really experienced in fantasy and sci fi (and half the time I don’t even know what I’m doing XD)

And a book like yours isn’t something that I’d probably pick up on my own.

In no way is this because of the book itself…it’s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He was frustrated as anyone would be in the circumstances…… Turin is the one with the wicked temper around here. You can be someone who is naturally very easy going, but who does lose their temper in a certain situation, or at least gets frustrated

Ohhh okay 👍

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron’s  flaws whether or not…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay…I’m so sorry…I’m not the best at critiqueing 😣😭😭😭😭Actually I’m horrible at it but oh well

OK, in the begining I said that Aaron was 18!! Turin was a year or two older Sabina was 16! Does that fix it???

Well…you should be able to tell a character’s age based on how they act, without the author saying that. Since both…[Read more]

Here’s Sef’s playlist

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Guys…

I just made a playlist for Lilitu…

Apparently Lilitu loves rock songs…

WHAT HAVE I DONE?!?!

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