Aranel

Bwahahaha you guys aren’t going to believe what just happened

@ellette-giselle

Just popping in because I’m bored, lol!

I kinda agree with Whaley. The story just doesn’t seem like it’s going towards a specific goal…like the events seem a bit random and idk how to describe it but it’s like your story’s missing something but it frustrates me because I don’t know what exactly I’m missing, just that something…[Read more]

@theducktator

Yeah for realllll!

@whalekeeper

yeahhh it can be really hard sometimes :/

@whalekeeper

While I am more emotional objectively than Linus, being a girl teen and all, I do not like sharing my feelings or even physically expressing them through tears. I am an extremely private person and I do not like to look for sympathy from anybody; it makes me feel guilty. I tend to cry in private.

One side of me would like to be c…

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I also forgot that you guys talked about this on this thread so I posted a different reply in the other topic.

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

I’m kind of bored and I just wanted to pop in on this conversation cuz I find it really interesting!

If my brother were to accuse me of not caring (which might actually happen), I would get even more frustrated because I would want to care more, but find myself unable to.

YES THIS IS SO ME! I mean I’d definitely…[Read more]

Maybe it wasn’t in this forum…but I know I heard it somewhere, lol!

Did I just hear that most girls want to be held and comforted?!?!?

I’m not like this AT ALL!

I prefer to sob on my bedroom floor by myself and when my family comes in I pretend like I’m fine XD

and then when I do work up the courage to tell someone what’s bothering me…

I do not want to be held…I want someone to tell me how to fix the probl…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVE THAT SO MUCH

poor Riker <333

@theshadow

If they’re genuine enemies…I’d say just make them constantly arguing or trying to show each other up, and constantly trying to do something better than the other.

Also Pinterest can help a lot with this and give you some ideas!

@theshadow

Anything specific details you want help with?

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww girl I am so sorry, I can’t even imagine how hard that must be!!! You’re so strong for going through that and I promise, everything will turn out the way it’s meant to!! Our Heavenly Father has a wonderful plan of happiness for us, and the trials and challenges we face now will seem like nothing when we return to Him and h…

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@ellette-giselle

Aw I’m sorry! I am the same way so you’re not alone!!!!!!!!!

BUT YOUR SHORT STORY ON YOUR MAGAZINE WAS SO GOOD I GOT CHILLS!!!!

I’ll ask one of my guy friends tonight for ya! XD XD

I get that it would be awkward so I got you girl

@ellette-giselle

Aw I’m sorry :/

I get that! Just let us know if you’re ever sick of critiques and just want to hear the positive stuff to get encouraged!

I’d say…just interview some of your guy friends and ask them to give you a cheat sheet XD XD but I think Whaley’s right, they really do just vibe lol

@keilah-h

Thank you!

And so cool!

@ellette-giselle

Um, yeah. His fear of the unknown already came up a little bit in the barn, and though he got over it there, it is still under the surface and it will come again. I promise.

Maybe you could make his fear a lot stronger, like showing us his thoughts instead of telling us them?

“Well then I don’t see how much help you’ll be,”…

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