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@jonas

In that case, maybe the prison could be split into several units and you could call this one the ‘Experimental Unit’

Okay, I like that. Maybe I could call it the EP instead of the UNIT for short? (I know, so creative…not.)

@jonas

I love conviction! And oh my gosh, Flaz would drive Ellis insane, this is going to be hilarious!

@grcr

I love Flaz! His personality is just…awesome!

@acancello

Thank you! <3

@grcr

No, that’s fine!

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @rae @esther-c

Ottoline

Safe.

Ottoline never thought that she would use that word to describe her current state of being, but here she was.

Hugo held her close to his side as they watched the stars through the window. It was peaceful. She couldn’t believe that a mere 24 h…[Read more]

@jonas

Got it!

 I was under the impression that this entire house was about to be transported into another dimension. Do you mean that you’ll start building to that but you won’t just immediately jump to it?

I’m not exactly sure, XD I’m working on the next RP when they get transported to the other dimension, so yeah you were right.

@jonas

I think we’ll keep it in this RP, but slowly make the transition to what Rae said, if that makes sense. Do you want us to start tagging you when we post our RP’s?

@hybridlore

Yeah that’s what i was thinking too! That’s too bad, I bet she’s disappointed (if that’s the reason). I’m gonna miss her!

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr @rae @esther-c

Do you guys want me to make them all transfer to the other world Rae was talking about?

Or does someone else want to? I’m fine with either XD

@acancello

then pulled Ottoline close to him and together they watched the stars inch across the sky.

That is so good!!!

@esther-c

Wow, that’s so cool!

I wish I could come up with plot twists like that XD

@thearcaneaxiom

I like it! She reminds me of EVE from the movie WALL-E, lol

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

That is the way of writers🤣 Your characters feel real to you. Frank Herbert’s son felt like he had to compete with his father’s characters for love and attention, so it is a very real thing that influences our world. (Sorry if I just made that a little depressing at the end, his son happily continues his father’s legac…

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@janellebelovedpig

I miss her already

@jonas

You might not care, but I try to maintain a fairly equal ratio of male MCs to female MCs in a book. This shouldn’t be the deciding factor, but consider that adding Liv as a MC would give you a 2 to 4 ratio (double the amount of female characters to male), whereas you currently have as even a ratio as possible with 2 to 3.

Obviously, you m…

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@freedomwriter76

Oof, sounds pretty sad to me…poor siblings 🥺 (sounds pretty angsty XD)

From what I’ve read, your book seems really interesting!! 💕🤩

Well that scene was from an old story, which gave me the idea to write my current WIP based off of that. So it didn’t make it through editing, neither did most of that very sloppy 41K very rough “dr…[Read more]

@jonas

I would say it completely depends on relevance to the main plot. Is she going to have future interactions with the main cast? Will her actions have an impact on the overall story? If not, then I would say it would be best not to, but there is another option.

Yeah, she’s going to play a part in the story.

That makes sense, I’ll experiment I…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Only read this if you want too…but look how outdated the style is!!! I can’t believe I used to write like this, and that was just last year! CRINGE. This is one of the only scenes that I teared up during…and i still don’t really get why. It’s not that good tbh…

Jorryn

After what seems like at least a million more steps…

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@freedomwriter76

made me cry so many times writing it tho! XD

I haven’t actually cried while writing any stories (though I have a feeling that my current WIP will do it sometime soon as it deals with abuse, romance, and evil in general and some parts are sad!).  I once wrote a sad chapter last spring for a school assignment about this boy who was…[Read more]