Aranel

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?

Also, is there anything I could improve on?

(Am I changing things too much?)

Chapter 1

The world is a dark…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Just fight him or something. The Sword chirped, That always seems to help.

Lol

Ottoline

She opened her eyes and sat up. Rays of light seeped in through the windows. She turned over in her bed. They were all exhausted.

“Do we have to go downstairs to eat breakfast? I mean have to?” Hedieh was saying from the bunk directly above Ottoline’s. “Because I don’t want to get murdered by a guy with anger issues.”

“I don’t want to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Great job! Yesterday I wrote 1,167.

@rae

lol

Who’s going to write the next RP?

@jonas

Somehow, I am going to force Ellis and Ottoline to get along. hehe. 😈😈😈

@jonas

Yeah I was just joking XD

@trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, i don’t think so either.

@highscribeofaetherium

ALL of it is hyperbole XD

Yep.

You know what would be fun? Once everyone calms down, the boys and girls play truth or dare together, lol

@thearcaneaxiom

good question.

Ellis, chill, it’s a pillow fight XD

@jonas

Well, why not? thought Ellis. He punched Zahlin in the face.

Oh my gosh!! I literally started laughing lol

@highscribeofaetherium

I know lol

…and eat out of their trash cans…

I love that XD

They’re so great that everyone else kisses the ground where they walk…

Compound Fracture

He looked around, trying to penetrate the darkness.

“This isn’t fair!” he pouted. “First, the stupid prisoner interrupts my evil laugh, then he has the audacity to leave before I can start my beautiful monologue, and now I’m who knows where!” He stood up and kicked a rock as hard as he could. “I suppose,” he muttered, “the onl…[Read more]

Ottoline

She froze.

He’s going to kill me. 

Her heart was pounding. She heard voices screaming to let her go, but the hand over her mouth stayed firm.

“Ladies, attack!” a voice yelled, “Let’s give these boys a taste of feathers!”

@thearcaneaxiom

Sure!