Aranel

Fracture

How rude, he thought. Why was everyone ignoring him? Obviously they were all too scared of him to venture near him. He smiled to himself. How he loved being scary.

Is Fracture the only one who doesn’t have anyone who generally hates him?

Fracture

“I would start, but I genuinely doubt that either of you would share your name in return.” Fracture raised his hand and eagerly jumped up and down.

“Oh, I will! I will! But my name is so scary you probably couldn’t even hear it without trembling in fear-”

“I already know your name, you dummy.”

“How…DARE YOU!” he gasped for breath.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The only one I could think of is “breaking bad habits”.

But this is an interesting topic! Thanks for the tag!

@rae

you’re good! (I’m not good at it either.)

@highscribeofaetherium

lol

that’s harsh.

Still though, it’s amazing how fast this RP is moving! I was gone over one weekend, and we had like 15 new pages!!

@highscribeofaetherium

You and Jonas are wayyy better at memes than I am, though, lol

@jonas

@trailblazer

I like these scenes!

@highscribeofaetherium

Lol is Fracture still doing his maniacal laughter, utterly oblivious to everything happening around him? 😂

Yep. XD

Fracture

“You coming?” something poked him. He did the logical thing and screamed.

Rolling away and jumping to his feet in what he hoped was a threatening fighting stance.

“HOW DARE YOU tell ME what to do!”…[Read more]

Ottoline

She had to work with Ellis?

I’m dead. So dead. She wiped her sweaty palms on her pants. Why couldn’t he have paired me with someone who won’t murder me the first chance we’re alone? (I know he wouldn’t actually, but she just is scared of everything, XD)

She was terrified. Terrified of the dragons, of everyone carrying a sword, of El…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I started laughing while writing this XD

@jonas

Well…that was intense.

Good job!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Fracture

He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.

That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.

“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I t…

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@jonas

 I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist.

Oh, that’s funny! I’ve read WAY more first person novels with multiple POV’s. i’ve read more of those than third person POV’s.