Anne of Lothlorien

@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!

@winter-rose I think we posted at the same time… 😛

I am editing for a while if anyone is out there. @daeus @audrey-caylin @winter-rose @ethryndal @jess @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @graciegirl @jenali

@Alia Poor guardian angel. 😛
Yes, I’ll be praying.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 that is a GREAT midpoint. So right now what you’re looking for seems to be a first plot point— where Kara commits to action. What about Blake? Was he taken in the fight with the Catastrophes? Or did he use it as a distraction to infiltrate the prison and get caught or something? If that’s the case Matthias could have gotten…[Read more]

@His-instrument YES THE TRAILER. OH HELP. HOW CAN I WAIT UNTIL DECEMBER? Also, I think there’s a topic about Rogue One somewhere. *digs it up* Oh yes, here it is. https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/rogue-one/ I’m pretty sure it’s mostly @Emma-Flournoy and I ranting though… XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 perhaps you should try mapping out Kara’s arc in detail and going from there?

@Ethryndal I know. My impeccable memory and attention to detail must have failed me then. *hangs head in shame*

I was so happy to be proven incorrect though. XD

@Daeus Oh, I knew she drew it, I just saw it colored in your version. Cool. Effects.

@anne-of-lothlorien I second everything @adry_grace has said. (How come these people are so good at voicing my exact opinion?) I love the ending. LOVE. And the present tense is good too. 🙂

@Aratrea lol

All right @That_Writer_Girl_99 read through the document, and left a comment in one place, but otherwise you did good. 😀 You’re handling Matthias with more subtlety. *thumbs up*

Have you figured out your plot problems? Any way I can help you?

@BethanySinkyRoses welcome aboard, new KeePer! 😀 Look forward to seeing you around.

(@aratrea I hope you know that profile picture makes you impossible to take seriously. XD)

@anne-of-lothlorien *groans miserably and winces* Agh, I’m sorry, I have to leave for homeschool co-op in fifteen minutes, and there’s no way I can draw something that fast. *headdesk* I’m sorry. 🙁

@delightinlife Sure, I’ll beta-read it. Just make sure you start a separate thread for it, and don’t post it here. Otherwise, it might get lost among all the writerly ramblings. 🙂

@gideon-sowdon @dragon-snapper Oops. Um…I plead artistic license. 😀

@anne-of-lothlorien Challenge excepted.

@gideon-sowdon Aye, he did.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 no, you’re doing and have done great. Just last I checked you were having problems with the plot, and that’s the one thing that really hangs me up when I struggle with that.
*cough* I suppose you can ignore that bit of advice then. 😉

@That_Writer_Girl_99 quick tip: look at your different character motivations. Each character is the hero of his or her own story. What are they aiming for? What is it they want? Kara’s not going to be the only one moving the plot. Each person’s life is an entire story. You chose to tell those stories through Kara’s eyes, but they’re still separate…[Read more]

I will tag @audrey-caylin for another opinion on Blogger (and blogging in general). Just to make things confusing. 😀