Anne of Lothlorien

@Cloudy sorry I’ve been so long getting back! 😛 What @GracieGirl said; also in some places I felt that you jumped too quickly from deep, in the moment scenes to hurried overviews. To fix that, you should probably make lines for scene breaks, and make your deep in the moment scenes even deeper, while your overviews can either be shortened, or…[Read more]

@emily-d @perfectfifths Well, the biggest slang I can think of is “ya’ll”, but that’s more of a southern thing. Otherwise, I can’t really think of any either. Really, there are a bunch of different regional accents. Northern, Southern, and Californian.

It’s been missing for a while, actually. 😛

Thanks. Really have no idea how I missed this.

@Daeus

@graciegirl Alright! Read you around!
I wrote 1020.

DAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! *rushes in and falls on the floor in a weepy mess* HOW DID I MISS THIS??? Is it still open? Can I still reserve a slot? Please??? *begs you from her knees*

@Daeus

@winter-rose *staggers* Oh my goodness!!! Ladies and gentlemen, the only word I can think of to describe this is WOW!

@daeus Adios!
@graciegirl I’m still going.

@Winter-Rose One little tip about breaking from your WIP…I took a several-month unintentional hiatus from my book, and when I came back to it, I couldn’t remember half of the things I was going to change to make it better. Certain spots I was going to add a bit of dialogue, or a symbolic moment, or whatever, but it had been so long that I forgot…[Read more]

@GracieGirl Aw, the poor little thing. I will pray. My family has two beloved cats, and I can only imagine how we’d feel if either of them was having an issue.

@LifeOfKatie Coolio! I was just poking around on it—Looks pretty good. 🙂

@graciegirl @daeus I’ll be working on my WIP.

@jadamae Sweet! Yes, reviewing is TOUGH because it can get discouraging if it’s been awhile since you reviewed… I’m finding that out. 😀

@Daeus I’m pretty sure I could reasonably manage it. Send it on. 😀

If only I did know some British people. That’d be real fun.

@GracieGirl Aw, poor guy. I’ll be praying.

*cringes at all the beautiful sensible comments and retreats inside her dragonish shell*

@Winter-Rose umm… unfortunately the longest break I’ve ever taken, with all eight* novels I’ve finished, is… um… one night.
Literally. One night between novels and then I can’t wait any longer. I probably should take longer breaks… don’t kill me…[Read more]

@Winter-Rose @GracieGirl thank you both for your prayers, and yes, Gracie— I’ll pray. 😉 I don’t imagine something like that comes without a lot of emotional turmoil in the family too.

@daeus I have sent it to you. Be brutal. Fight hard against poor literature. 😉 May the force be with you.

@lifeofkatie Congrats on your blog! I like the subject matter you chose (being young and single); it’s something I think a lot of teenagers need to hear and it’s a topic dear to my heart. Some people seem to think singleness is a curse, when it’s really a blessing. I like how you compared life to a broken puzzle in your blogpost.

I saw you have…[Read more]

@daeus No, I can do the second one. At first it seemed like you were going to do three main groups, because you had nearing 9 beat-readers. But the second one is fine. I’ll be on vacation soon anyways, so this works best.
Will do.

@daeus Okay, sounds good. Though do keep in mind that I will be starting school mid-August.
When should I send you my manuscript?