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Joy replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@catwing HAHA, I love it!! Well done! 😀 😀 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Cliches in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
Whheeee there are some good ones over here. Cliches are so fun to pick on. Some in my list are similar to ones already listed, ’cause I wrote it before I read the thread. I think I’ll change my stuff to the bullet-point method I’m seeing though as it looks way easier to digest than how I wrote my thing.
- Damsel in distress
- opposite…
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice Makes sense…
I think I’ll sign off now. Good to talk to you! Maybe I’ll see you tomorrow.
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice It’s tricky! You’re welcome. Yeah, I know what you mean. I’m glad I could help at least a little. 😀
Hey, can you help me figure something out? I’m going to introduce a couple new characters into my Aetherlight roleplay (which is like the Aetherlight version of the KPA) who are sent to Aethasia by… I dunno… their parents?…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice (Sorry it took so long to respond!!) I think you should describe the setting more. I mean, I get the idea that the story is set in futuristic Australia, but I feel like the descriptions aren’t… authentic enough. I don’t know exactly what you’d need to do to improve on it, but basically just make the setting and world more…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice I could really feel the emotion in it. You did well.
May I offer a suggestion? If so, should I do it here? In your doc? Somewhere else?
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine Good night! Hope to see you tomorrow. Earlier in the night would be even better. XD
@seekjustice I’m enjoying your book so far! I just finished reading over Justice’s riot in front of the town hall. It really made my heart pound.
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine I’ve finished beta-reading and now I’m working on the comical poem prompt you gave me. 😉
@seekjustice I know, you just didn’t know I was here. 😉 Going pretty well!
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine @seekjustice Heyyyy, I’m still here! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic Character name in the forum Characters 6 years, 3 months ago
@amy-l-klob I found a website with boys names in the 1700s that might help out a little! My favorite names on the list for your character are Abe, Amos, Asa, Eli, Ike, Jed, Oscar, Reuben, Stanley, and Thaddeus. Hope that helps! 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@catwing They do sound cute!
Don’t you live on a farm? I forgot. If so what kinds of animals do you have?
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@catwing What kind of goats do you have? (I know nothing whatsoever about goat breeds or anything like that. Lecture me if you wish. 😛 )
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@catwing You sound busy! I wish my writer life was that lively. 😛
Haha, goats, eh? What’s it like having goats?
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@catwing CHESHIRE CATWINGIE! 😉
Hello! How are you doing?
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine @catwing @valtmy @seekjustice
‘Ello. Anyone here?
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine Hopefully inspiration will kick in soon…
Can you remind me one more time about all the positions on the Kingdom now? I know SeekJustice is the queen… Or something.
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine (Sorry it took so long to respond. I’m a little distracted.)
Fair enough…
Do you think I should write another KPA? A shorter one? XD
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy I’m glad your writing is going well!! 😀 😀
(I’m not trying to imply that I’m glad you keep disappearing, by the way… XD)
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine I’m pretty sure I’m on the second draft. Why?
Good! I’m glad! So now I know I DON’T want poison ivy. XD
A jackalope is like a giant rabbit with antlers. Look up pictures. 😉
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@catwing I like blog posts with art in them (like your comic) and life posts in general. Like the kind of stuff Ethryndal does (if you’ve ever read her blog).
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