Anna Brie

@catwing Yes! Isn’t editing so much fun!

I’m going through and killing all the telling, and making my sarcastic character ten times as snarky. It’s awesome. 😛 I’m about 16, maybe 17% through with editing. Making progress. 😀

I’ve been able to incorporate world building too, which I decided to do after I wrote the book. *hides under piles of…[Read more]

@catwing Hiya! I’m editing too!

@salome01w4g @that_writer_Girl_99 Time for dinner! Have fun with ethics and novels that don’t want to be written! 😀

@that_writer_Girl_99 That sounds…difficult. 😉

@that_writer_Girl_99 *pats shoulder*

What’s ethics?

@That_writer_Girl_99 Watcha studying?
@salome01w4g Hiya! I’m worldbuilding.

@That-writer-girl-99 Hey, you still there?

@emily @shannon @salome01w4g @daeus @catwing @daughteroftheking
I’m worldbuilding at the moment.

@michael-stanton *nods* Of course, of course…that makes sense. Poor underlings.

Hi, @jess-penrose! I myself wrote a Cinderella retelling a while back, (though it wasn’t my best work) and I may or may not have some ideas for you.

1. Have the prince be good and the Fairy Godmother (or equivalent thereof) have told Tareyn that he stole the pendant. But the Fairy Godmother (or equivalent thereof) actually stole it and wants to…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate. WHAT DID YOU DO!?!?!?

I mean, its cool. Really, really cool. But…it’s not Vy’s picture of you! And you changed your name….

Awesome, though. Aislie likes.

Kylo Ren is the worst…

@xonos-darkgrate FINALLY! Someone who agrees with me. (@kate-flournoy and @daeus think he’s awesome for some reason…) 😉

Kay, perfect! Actually going to choir right now, so i wouldn’t have been able to read your response anyway. @xonos-darkgrate

Hey @xonos-darkgrate want to take a look? Don’t worry, there is *lots* of intrigue and other stuff like that. 😉

@daeus Yeah. What they said. 😉

Btw, I love the book. I’ve gotten maybe 6 chapters through? I don’t really keep track of chapters…

@jess-penrose

Well, the version of a synopsis I know is a maximum of 10 page summary of a book that describes the plot, characters, message, world and the writer’s thoughts. Soooo… I assume these are slightly different things in Australia. That’s all.

That’s my definition of a synposis too…I mean, that’s a good reason for writer’s to hate…[Read more]

I’m confused as well. And yes, @xonos-darkgrate Cinnar would love it here. Probably Julie Martin/Stanley too, what with the unicorns and such.

@raevynstar Oh…yeah….that would make a Labrador a problem. 😛

@daeus *dances* Yay! Destruction to telling!

@daeus
Well, big thoughts is mainly that you should take out the last paragraph, because although you’re trying to appeal with struggles like that, people might not want to think of themselves as weak or cowardly, if you know what I mean. Maybe they know that subconsciously, but who wants to admit that they are a coward? I mean, a Christian might…[Read more]

@jess-penrose XD Yeah, that’s my thoughts. 😀 You might have noticed I have very strong opinions on these things. 😛