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Jane Maree replied to the topic Hole in my Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 5 months ago
@Dekreel everyone else has some good ideas, and I second theirs. Basically, if you can bring in a side plot or throw in another antagonist to add more conflict and higher stakes it’ll keep your middle going strong.
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic First Fantasy Story in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily Wow, I missed this. OK, I kinda skimmed, so some of this might have already been said.
Make. A. Map. Even if you don’t use it in your book, (which is always a good idea) it will help your brain a whole lot.
Create a Culture. Culture is so fun!!! For example, Leiferan culture is HUGELY influenced by music. Therefore, I have songs in all…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Hole in my Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 5 months ago
@dekreel *processing*
Okay, so a middle of a story. I know absolutely nothing about Doctor Who, but I’m thinking you could add more clues as to whoever this Riddler person is (I skimmed the Thirteen plus Five thing, BTW). Some scenes could include traveling through this planet, searching for the answer to the riddle. Suggestions – 1) performing…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@dekreel @perfectfifths Yes. Yes. I was mean. Sorry. 😛
@lady-iliara *blink* I have no idea…
If I am to put a quote out there, then I won’t do another KP obscure one. One that should get this topic’s engine running. 😉
“It’s man’s discovery of Nunya.”
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Snapper replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@introvert_girl Really? You liked Force Awakens better?

Aha! I’m not alone! I liked it way better than Rogue One. Just couldn’t connect with the characters…or the plot of Rogue One.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writing Letters Within a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@shannon I am a little late, but I hope not by too much. 😀
So…letters eh? Um… With some of my letters I like to talk about what I’ve been working on recently. If your characters are Christians, they can talk a bit about God too. Also, big events, even if its something that only in the news. Coal mine news is certainly interesting. There…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@cindygreen *bows*
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Snapper and
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily @lady-iliara If you guys want to look at my Google Doc, I am on and can answer questions and such. (Also there’s a new part I finished. But, ya know.)
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@lady-iliara Wait. Is that a bad thing? Aethasians taking over the interwebs….actually, that’s AWESOME!!!
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic The Books of Leifer! (My trilogy needs help) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@catwing Yes, thank you. I actually had a small idea thing that the prophecy could be given before Darian disappears. It would complicate things a bit….but it would simplify some others. Thanks! 14 is how old I thought her would be.
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Oya, everyone! And, I have one thing to say.
@lady-iliara, DID ILAYNEjUST JOIN KINGDOM PEN WHEN I WASN’T LOOKING!??!?!?!
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@lady-iliara Yeah, we still have Nikko. And Aisy, of course!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose I’m out now. I reached 70,000 words tonight! YAAASSS!! 😀
Only 30,000ish to go!
Goodnight and goodluck!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily Hi bye!
@winter-rose I’m doing quite well. 😀 Working on writing. I’m going to try to reach 70,000 words tonight! Yay!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily @winter-rose I’m here! For the next thirty-five minutes or so. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
I also think this,
WRITER’S BLOCK:

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Snapper replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@dekreel and @inkling-for-christ When I think writer’s block, I think about pillows. I think about groaning. I think about that annoying blinky thing in Word that tells you where your writing is about to go. Blinking.
Ever blinking…
Taunting.
Telling me…
“We aint’ written nothing but maggoty bread in three stinkin’ days.” - Load More
