@anna-brie
Active 8 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
I’m jumping on too. 😀
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Other Picture Prompt Entries in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Thanks @ingridrd 🙂 Yeah, that’s what I was going for 😉 Haha
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Other Picture Prompt Entries in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Great prompt, @ingridrd! 🙂 Here’s the one I wrote…
Jessa crawled out from beneath her teacher’s desk, scraping her hands and knees against the broken glass that scattered the floor. She barely made out a tall dark figure emerging from the thick smoke that filled the classroom.
He reached for her hand.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Other Picture Prompt Entries in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@gretald The suspense is killing me too. Cause I don’t know what happens!!! XD
Yes @kate-flournoy I took a bit to decide, but I can only see two ends, so I chose to do swords. 😀 -
Greta replied to the topic We need a name in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@writefury, YES! We should totally do that. 🙂
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Greta replied to the topic "Silver Strings" Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Wow, this is beautiful poem, @jadamae. About the last line of the second stanza, I personally like “as her fingers with music teem” better, but they’re both beautiful.
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Greta replied to the topic Dominoes… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy, Good to know! I know I’ve said this before, but thanks for sharing your mistakes with us so we don’t make the same ones. 🙂 Congratulations on finishing your novel!!!!!
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Greta replied to the topic Other Picture Prompt Entries in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@bluejay, The suspense is killing me! What happens to the man? XD
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Greta replied to the topic We need a name in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@writefury, what a great idea!
@Daeus, Oh my word, that’s an awesome name! 🙂
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
I’m a little late @anna-brie but I think I’ll try it too 😀 (to the end of the next hour 😉 )
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
I’m a little late @anna-brie but I think I’ll try it too 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Haha, we were posting at the same time. Yes, it’s really good. We should do it again tomorrow, around the same time. (Actually I won’t be able to do it in the morning, {for me} maybe the afternoon {for me})
Yes, I think it worked. My fingers have never flown so fast. 😛 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@daeus How did you go? Believe it or not I finished a first draft on a new short story. I’ve called it ‘A Ticking Bomb.’ It will be interesting to see what the rest of my family (mainly my mum who is my editor) think of it. It was fun to do though. 🙂
It’s kind of weird to think that two people who have never met and live on opposite sides of the…[Read more] -
Faith Kindred replied to the topic We need a name in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, I’d say I’m a KPer… but Knights of Kingdom Pen sounds awesome! 🙂 I agree with you, @sarah-h. @writefury, you’d better get busy writing up something to say to newly dubbed knights. 😉
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@daeus me too. Good luck! 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@daeus. YES! We made contact. Yeah I can do that. (Which story should I work on???) 😀 This is going to be interesting. Three minutes to go….two minutes to go…..
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Other Picture Prompt Entries in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
The fog drifted silently through the trees creating ghostly objects. The rider sat motionless, only his moving eyes revealed that he was alive. Every now and then his horse shook its mane and the jingle of the metal parts of its bridle resounded in the silence. Suddenly the horse jerked up its big head. The crunch of snow under heavy feet could be…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Yep that would work. I could even mention a check list here. Thank you. 😀 😉 And “check” would work.
So glad you enjoyed it. It is definitely one of my favourites. 😀 -
BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Thank you all. I have pretty much figured out what to do. Do you think that (based upon Disney Aladdin) would they have had stalls/shops like that in Noah’s day? I have no idea how to find out. What are your views?
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