Anna Brie

@emma-flournoy @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jane-maree Can you guys please critique? Thanks.

@emma-flournoy @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @that_write_girl_99 @jane-maree Can you guys please critique? Thanks.

@emma-flourney @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @that_write_girl_99 @jane-maree Can you guys please critique? Thanks.

I wouldn’t mind a few more critiques: https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/excerpt-from-novel-please-critique/#post-30351.
@daeus did a great job, though. 🙂

@emma-flournoy I was trying to think of a negative, but I really couldn’t. XD

@graciegirl Read it. It’s good.

@daeus Thanks! 🙂

@daeus Haha. No. These are from when I was in grade 9. Sorry if that was confusing.

@ethryndal @graciegirl It’s really great seeing so many female INTJs on here.

@graciegirl Hi. The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes will remain my favourite, as it was the first of the books that I read. The one that introduced me to the brilliant Sherlock Holmes. A Study in Scarlet, A Scandal in Bohemia and The Final Problem always stand out to me. Thanks.

Now for something more positive. A proper Rogue One review.

Summary: Rogue One is a filler story set in between Episodes 3 and 4. It explains those missing details that fans have been pondering for years. Why is the Death Star so easy to destroy? How did Leia get this information? It is also the second Star Wars film to be focused on a female…[Read more]

Review: Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief

Summary: After a Fury attack at a museum, Percy Jackson gets taken to a camp by his friend Grover (a satyr) and driven by his mother, Sally. Sally gets seemingly killed by a minotaur at the entrance to Camp Half-Blood. In reality, she goes into some kind of bubble that takes her to the Underworld.…[Read more]

*creeps in through door and melts into shadows* *laughs at everyone’s self-destruction*

@winter-rose I’m keeping my eye on you. As self-declared Head of Security of Daeus’ dictatorship, I shall add to my defenses, a confetti-deflecting shield.

@rolena-hatfield I had fun! 378.

@daeus Ooh, nice. So far, I’ve written a 13 verse poem and 78 *cough* words to The Legend 2. But I’m still going, so hopefully, I’ll add a whole lot more to that.

@daeus Ah well, you know. It’s the least I can do.

@daeus Uno, dos, tres! He’s in!

@rolena-hatfield I’ll join you!