I am seeking beta’s for my MG Fantasy titled ‘The Untitled, which is still in progress

It is about two girls, one of Indian descent and the other of Korean descent, who are on a mission to save the book society of characters from fading, because of the crisis in the human world involving the removal of fictional books.

Now they have to go…[Read more]

Thanks

Thank you for the feedback, and also I have got one book published so far, and the novel I put up here, is going to get published probably by next year

Ya, that’s fine

Hi,

I would love for you to give me feedback

thanks, and if you want to beta read my work, you can go to the beta read thread

Try now

I have changed many things in my novel, please read it and let me know your feedback

Thank you for all that feedback I will work on it

Thanks for the feedback

I will work on that

Thanks again

2) How do I show two characters aged between 11-12 who are friend talk informally ?

Hope someone can answer these questions

I can give you feedback on your work

If you are still looking for someone to give feedback to you

Oh ok, i will try to keep it informal, I never realized that

Thank you so much for your feedback

What can i do to make my dialogue better and less choppy to read and flow better ?

Here is the link if you any of you want to listen

anchor.fm/anika674

P.S. I am a young writer

Here is the link

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KNU6IgjpxOtiIs0Qx9Is3OkgI2lLETTDumn7wamQc0Q/edit?usp=sharing

Let me know by when you will be done beta reading

Here is the link

When will you be done beta reading and giving me feedback ?

But if you are interested I can give you a link to my doc

And, also thanks if you want to beta read my work you can reply on this post https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/beta-reader-wanted-for-my-first-2-chapter-of-my-fantasy-wip/

I don’t believe me have met

Who are you ?

I am looking for a beta reader to read the first few chapters of my middle grade fantasy WIP and give me feedback

If anyone, is interested please let me know your email, and I will add you to my Google doc, so you can comment directly onto my doc.

Is ‘Untitled Charters of Fantasy’ a good title for my novel which I am planning to get published ?

Could you help me in understanding how I can craft a good Indian character ?

More specifically a young Indian girl around the age of 12.

And, I don’t have a particular favorite book or movie

My name is Anika, and I write middle grade fiction, currently I am working on my middle grade fantasy novel.