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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
You can start a thread with that question. Just press the community tab and choose the forum under which you want to put it. Then somewhere at the top there should be an option to “Create Topic”. I think that’s right.
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh, yes. You’re not wrong. I suppose it just depends how often it’s used.
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Esther replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
*nods head slightly* You as well. 😁 (You’re a throne warden, am I right?)
It did. It should get better, though… I hope 😜
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Thank you so much for the feedback! Super helpful! I’ve noticed that I do need to work on dialogue and character interaction more.
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Esther replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey!!
I LOVE WFS!!!
I would be a High Queen! 👑 And I think my older bro would make a great Throne Warden. My younger siblings wouldn’t quite fit their titles. Lol
I have watched the first episode and it is pretty good! It maybe could’ve been better, but I think it’s worth the watch. Can’t wait for the next one(s)!
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Gotcha 😉 I probably need more critique on my work anyway. I’ve only read it to a few of my cousins and my two younger siblings, so it’s always nice to get some critique that isn’t all positive bc it grows me as a writer and just as a person, tbh. 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
By the way, if you guys think anyone else would want to read it, please tag them. I may have forgotten some people 😅
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Now for the first 2 chapters!!!
Chapter 1
Amidala Nadir frowned. Something wasn’t quite right. She dipped her paintbrush in the pink paint and dabbed the canvas with the paint. She smiled. Perfect. She placed her painting supplies to the side and admired the flowers.
Pink roses… her favorite. They reminded her of hope. She peeked out the win…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago

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Esther started the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-who-is-interested-in-my-story-or-I-forgot-to-tag
Hey, everybody!! So, on this thread, I’ll be sharing my dystopian WIP. I would like some critique, but don’t feel obligated. So, since this is only a first draft, there may be typos, and keep in mind, I change things as…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Writing out of chronological order? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 9 months ago
First of all: Hi!! Don’t think I’ve met you yet. 😀
And to answer your question. I don’t think I can write out of order. Like, it would mess with me. There are always scenes that I’m really excited to write and I replay them in my head, but I just keep writing until I get to it.
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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
I love that!! My favorite characters from LotR are Sam, Legolas, and Aragorn.
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Esther replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Thanks! I actually plan to start a thread today where I’ll share chapters of my WIP!
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Esther replied to the topic Hey, everyone!! I’m finally here!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Hi!! Did you draw your profile pic?
Hey! (Gotcha 😉)
Hi!! I used to be really bad at volleyball, but I’ve gotten better! It just takes time and practice 😄 This year was my second year playing, but I’ve learned a lot.
1. I’ve done lots of different writing, even though some of those projects weren…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
Those are neat!!
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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
So cool!!
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Esther replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah. I will be sharing some of my more recent work someday soon. 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Hey, everyone!! I’m finally here!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
What you write about seems so cool!! I’d love to hear about it! Don’t worry, I can rant too!
1. Probably the 18th century Irish cottage
2. Everton would be a phoenix. Amidala would be… maybe a fox? Corie would be a unicorn lol. Tyrone would be a wolf.
3. My fave character would most likely be Artham or any of the Igiby child…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ok. I have to share the first chapter of a book I tried to write a few years back. It’s so cringy.
I’ve written worse, tho. My writing has changed, even though you guys haven’t seen it yet.
When one’s life is normal and almost perfect, it seems nothing too out of the ordinary or anything bad might happen; but during these times of normali…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
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