Nil A.

@kyronthearcanin

At least you’re aware of it. That’s good. 🙂

It does get easier to write with unique voice though as you keep writing because you get to know your characters more. 😀

Y’all gotta read this. XD

This is half of chapter one and all of chapter two from one of the first book I tried to write when I was 8 or 9. (Basically the first part of the chapter was where a 10 year-old girl named Zoey was outside and she got sucked into this tornado thing. XD) (Oh, and I’m leaving all the spelling, grammar, and positioning to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh my word, I love that! XD I love reading old writing compared to recent writing. Lol

@kyronthearcanin

Ok… 😏😁

(Oh, and I added something to my post up there. I don’t know if you missed it.)

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, so I love the young thief trope. 😂 (When it’s done right of course 😉 ) So I think Brycen might end up being one of my favorites. 😁

Yeah, I figured I’d have to move some stuff around once the drafting was done. But hey, I’ll just surprise myself and magically have double the chapters that way XD

Right? XD

@kyronthearcanin

Girl, this is so good!! I love it!! 😄

I would suggest separating the two POVs into separate chapters (so you’d have 4 chapters at this point), but you do whatever you want, because chapter length isn’t the most important thing when drafting. 😉

Looking forward to the next chapters!! 😀

@janellebelovedpig

I’m getting more intrigued as I read. I love where this is going! 😄

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in

And here’s part 3:

All day long Little One tried to catch Loving Prudence alone, but the siblings always seemed to be around. Then just before supper Little One saw her chance.

As Little One stepped into the kitchen, Loving Prudence looked up from her…[Read more]

esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in

Part 2 is out now! Thanks for reading! 🤗

@freedomwriter76

idk…I guess I forget about him at times…XD😅 His book is on backburner, I guess that’s why, lol! 😂

Lol, no biggie. 😁 I get that. 😉

Aww, thanks!!! ❤️❤️❤️ Aww, I’m glad!!! 🥰😁

Yw! 😀

@kyronthearcanin

Ooooh! I’ll definitely read this when I get the time! 👍 😄

@freedomwriter76

(I totally get that, girl…same for me! XD😅)

XD

Praise the Lord that He still loves us despite our mistakes and that He is always there to help us overcome sin! ❤️❤️

@freedomwriter76

AHH, why have I not heard about Abelard until now?! He is so cool!!! I love him!!! 😆

@otherworldlyhistorian

Oooh, Karci sounds so interesting!! 😀

@freedomwriter76

🥰 (aww, that’s okay, girl! Take whatever time you need! ❤️)

Thanks. 😅 😊

IKR!? ❤️❤️❤️XD (Aww, girl, that makes me so happy!!! 🥰🥰🥰😁 Haha…yeah…I don’t like them either 😅)

Yes!! 🥰 (I’m so glad!! [Let’s just say that encouragement is something I personally need to work on. It’s so much easier when I’m texting with someone or talk…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks!! 😊 They definitely are!

@freedomwriter76

I love Ami and Ev!!! ❤️❤️❤️ (okay…okay…especially Ev 😂)

Thx!!

lol. Of course! 😉 😆(I do too. 🤭)

@gwyndalf-the-wise @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

Thanks so much!! 😊

@booksbyjayna

You’re good! 🙂

Part 2!

All through supper Little One tried to focus on her siblings’ conversation. She tried to be normal, but her Bag of Entertained Thoughts felt so heavy, she kept figeting with it. If anyone noticed, no one seemed bothered.

That night Little One could hardly sleep, haunted by images of Undiscerned at work stoking and bellowing the burning…[Read more]