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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
Ok. I am in the middle of section 2. I’ll go back and finish it. I’m just so… amazed.
WHY would ANYONE in his right mind Say That? XD I’m sorry, it’s just something I remember from a visiting missionary. You rarely if ever start off saying “the gods are false.” Telling people everything they believe is a lie will typically…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
Ooo, lies. XD if I remember right, they want to start with little lies (because they’re more believable) and then work toward bigger lies with more power. So here are some ideas for chains of lies.
“You should be able to be strong enough on your own” (so when you falter, “you must be a failure” can follow)
“If God loved you,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
Leo
Five thirty. Silvia stood in the kitchen doorway with most of her hair still in a loose braid and a comb in her hand. The wild curtain of curls nearly hid her puffy, red rimmed eyes.
“Good morning, Sis.” Leo whispered and set down the spatula. “Didn’t get much sleep?”
She shrugged and shuffled over to fill the tea kettle.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper (Do you like sugar or cream with that?)
Thank ya’ll so much! I am enjoying using a simpler, more whimsical style than I use with graphite. Watercolor is just… fairytale-esc.
And shading with watercolor is finally starting to make sense. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks ago
I would like to not be a night owl. It just seems to always happen.
But no, I should try at least to go to bed at a earlier time.
*Nods to myself*
*Sighs*
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
Sypher
Rax. Ben. These must be their short names. Sypher glanced between the two strangers, his lips pressed in a thin blue line.
Then he blinked and looked away. Maybe these people were strange, but this place was even stranger, so what else was a sprite to expect?
“Syph. You may call me Syph.” He waved a hand to the vaulted door…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 1 day ago
*Distant sobbing*
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Hopes I’m not shoving into a conversation too much*
Yes…I actually stayed up til 11pm last night to write down a character scene with two of my guys…I know…I woke up really late, but I wanted to write that scene down before I forgot it! Does that happen to you?
*Chokes on my tea*
11 pm is late? Gracious, I must be an insomniac or something. I’m d…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @ifyouknowAlwin @anyone
Ok… You know that one character? The one who is disturbingly realistic? If I make a thread sometime later this month about handling dark topics in a God glorifying way, this is why.
Meet Letice, Alwin’s mother. I love her, but I heard her story years ago and…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Sypher
The blow had sent him tumbling to the pavement, a sudden pool of water softening his landing. The sprite slowly picked himself up and dusted the droplets off. His shoulders relaxed as the puddle evaporated back into vapor.
The towering figure was still there along with…too many other people. A darker blue flush crept up the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 2 days ago
I like him! He looks like a good friend to have in hard times.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Oooo, a scene….
Leo does have a point. At least fighting the Nazis gives him an idea of purpose. Poor kiddo.
Poor Riker though. I’m rather proud of him. Leo definitely struggles to see the hurt in other people.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 3 days ago
The bois!!!! Yay!! It’s been a while. Their story is so fascinating/emotional/fantastic.
*realizes they’re up for adoption*
I’ll adopt Wolfgang. Or Leo. Or….
Or… Can I be the little aunt who makes them cookies when they feel down? XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@koshka @peopleinterested @whoever
I’m playing with watercolor again! My favorite twin sister got me SpArkLY wAtErcOloRs. I am infatuated.
Anyway, this is Sypher, the character Koshka just put in the School RP.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I’m good with it being morning!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I struggle with finishing too! (Or getting anywhere beyond Chapter 3 before I subside to excessive world building….)
I have found that writing out my thoughts for the scene no matter what they sound like does help me get something to work with. I can trash it later, but I will probably have a scene “frame” solidified. (Is that a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
*whimpers*
I’m struggling too right now. Just trying to make the time to write, and then when I do I find myself staring blankly at the page wondering why anything but my WIP will write bit not the WIP…
*Sighs*
I’ve also only finished first drafts for short stories, not a novel yet. Which is something I’m hoping to change this year but life.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@loopylynn
Ooops. Sorry. This makes sense.
*Nods*
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I think some of the others already were RPing as daytime too anyway…?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I kind of made it day. It’s like when Joshua had the sun and moon stand still….talk about taking verses out of reference.
Sorry, I realized I didn’t tag you in the intro RP.
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