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Jaybird replied to the topic Scribles from a Natalian Scribe (Green Ember Fanfics) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Nooo!
*Pounds helplessly on desk*
There are SPOILERS in here!!!
Okay, okay, you flatter me. 😉 But if you will read this, bear in mind that I have taken some liberties with the royal family tree. Not everyone that is of the Royal family in this is actually royal in the books. Just so ya know.
And just kinda try to avoid the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing a Character that's Mute and Deaf? in the forum Characters 3 years, 11 months ago
Oh Eli…*sniff*
I’ve never written a character that was deaf or mute, but I have read some, and I am learning ASL ( or rather relearning what I knew a long time ago).
For the mute side: at such a young age he wouldn’t be talking much anyway if he was deaf. All his communication would be via sign language, which as a language…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Scribles from a Natalian Scribe (Green Ember Fanfics) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Thank you!!
A lot of stuff… 😉
I’ll try to get the next bit sent in today. If not, then it’ll go in tomorrow.
Of course we leave you hanging. Cliffhangers are an essential part of serial publications. 😉
Thanks!!!
Answer: Yes, in Ember Falls we begin to get glimpses of life for the rabbits under the…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Scribles from a Natalian Scribe (Green Ember Fanfics) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
A quick background to this story:
The MC, Lillian or also called Lilith, is a character of my own. While she isn’t in the series, her existence isn’t impossible either, everything considered. This story takes place over the last two books, Ember Rising and Ember’s End.
It should mostly explain itself, but if there are any questions, I’ll be…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Scribles from a Natalian Scribe (Green Ember Fanfics) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
*Sighs and opens door*
Come in, if you really must, I would be doing the same.
You can read the first but without much danger of a spoiler… I think.
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Koshka replied to the topic WriteTrack. Anyone Wanna Join? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Okkaaayyyy…I think I did that right? I’m registered…whatever that means.
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Jaybird replied to the topic WriteTrack. Anyone Wanna Join? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Jaybird started the topic Scribles from a Natalian Scribe (Green Ember Fanfics) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
*Cracks open door*
Pssst, come in, hurry!
*Looks around before closing door*
Welcome to the Storyguild!
I have invited you here to share our stories that are… Natalian.
Before I start, however, I want to put forward a giant warning.
MY TALE INCLUDES MAJOR SPOILERS FOR THE SERIES.
If you have NOT read Ember Falls, I do NOT recommend…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic WriteTrack. Anyone Wanna Join? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Awwwww, that’s so sweet!
And sad. I feel sorry for Vratislav.
His babies are growing up, and he can’t be there… 😢
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Whoa! Thank you for answering my questions. I love those plot twists! They are so sweet…
(I had remembered the “mad” zookeeper, and I was curious to say the least.)
And I get changing it up. It makes a lot of sense, and honestly, is a little more suspenseful this way. (And very like Jocelyn.)
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
XD Kind of? Although at this point he’s about seven years old, so he’s counted a youth and is not a child.
Ah yes, the next scene/part of this scene is from Vulk’s point of view…and just so you know he’s always been a bit of a rascal.
Uh, not exactly. It’s more of the fact Vratislav knows what is going on and that the season o…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Oh good. XD Poor Nyx, poor Zlatan, and poor anyone who happens to be stuck with them.
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @queen_of_alvastia
Y’all, I finally got the first scene for Heart of Gold writen!!! I’m totally thrilled…
Sgriss, sgriss, shgrit. The blade slid back against the whetstone, its blue-black blade coated in the fine grit.
Zlatan watched his father’s brow smooth and contract with his work. The o…
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Wow. That’s such a good plot twisty thingy! Now I’ve got sooo many questions.
Does she ever learn who her father is? What happened to her cousin? How do Ara and November work into everything? Is she blamed for the murder at any time? I seem to remember you mentioning that something like that happens. Ahhhhhh!
Regains composure…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
XD I was starting to freak out too, especially as I was like How in the world has Nyx and even Lynn missed that!?!
Oohhh dear…
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Uh whoa, that’s…amazingly awful. (What is her uncle’s name?)
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Suspense?
I am on the edge of my seat…
The different parts are all right, but we need the rest!!!
Ach, Lynnie…
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Hmm…
Slides closer to the wall, hand now gripping knife hilt.
I’m not sure about this…
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ohhhhh, I smell treason…
Squirms in chair before remembering my dignity and clasping my hands.
Is Ridley black haired?
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