Alia

@seekjustice @rochellaine @jenwriter17 @alia @dekreel @valtmy @ariel-ashira I’m here writing. 🙂

@valtmy I see.  Yes, regarding worldbuilding that makes sense.

Well, in that case I think Jean would be stupid to be living still in the same city instead of relocating to another city or country.  The world is huge, and he can go anywhere he wants to, as he has a lot of money (I think that was established, right?) so why would he stay right t…[Read more]

@seekjustice Oh, and I don’t mean that Caderousse herself is necessarily a spy per se.  Just that she seems to be acting like one in the hypothetical you proposed.  If she’s targeting one particular person for one particular reason, rather than crime in general, she’d likely have some sort of spy system looking out specifically for what Jean is d…[Read more]

@seekjustice

My first thought on reading your question was on how that would impact the original confrontation between Caderousse and Sapphire.  If Caderousse had been observing and examining the Verde family for years in attempt to find a pretense to arrest Jean, (or something similar, I’m not sure exactly what you’re intending here, but the…[Read more]

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Yes, I’d thought about some of those consequences but I hadn’t actually thought about Sapphire’s mother. I really should do something with her…she kind of only existed to explain why Sapphire and Chessy had no mother. And I’ve been thinking about the details of the ID system, but that’s a conversation for another time.

#2 That’s true. I…[Read more]

@valtmy

For some reason I never got notified that you’d replied 😀

I know, I’m so easily distracted! (and yes, I’m waiting eagerly for the next part!)

most of them, a few pulled out, but I have several thousand (getting close to 15-20k) words  worth of feedback, so I have enough to go on.

I was considering talking to @rochellaine about it…[Read more]

@valtmy

I’ll be around for a bit 😀 I’m supposed to be drafting, but instead I’m pondering problems in Stars Fill Infinity.

@valtmy @seekjustice Alas I must also vanish into the night and sleep. Farewell. *grins* *vanishes*

@rochellaine Bye!

@catwing @seekjustice @valtmy I’ll be leaving now.  Happy writing!

@rochellaine thanks. :3

@catwing Wow, congratulations!!! 😀 😀

@rochellaine *runs back into room excitedly* *grins way too hard* 437! That’s got to be my record or something! Ha! Yes! I won a word war! 😀

@catwing Well, I’m pretty consistent tonight.  This time it was 401 words. 😛

@rochellaine Alright, I’m starting. Late, but it’s still a timer, so… *shrug* 🙂

@rochellaine

I might pass on this one. I’m currently just cleaning up a little.

@valtmy

Scrivener doesn’t have Australian spelling (Word does though) so I have to use Canadian spelling, but it doesn’t recognise all those unique Aussie words 😛

@seekjustice Who knows?  The Word processor seems to be quite a bunch of confusion, at any rate.

@catwing

Okay I’ll be starting my timer for 15 minutes now.  SeekJustice, you’ll be joining too, right?

@catwing I added most of my character names to the dictionary on my computer, but new ones still come up with red lines, particularly Yilla for whatever reason.

@rochellaine

Maybe the Word processor is the reason we have intoxicated water and disembowelled voices?

@catwing Ah, I see. Yes, it did that to all my characters’ names too, but then I added them to the dictionary, so that helped.  Maybe you should do that.  Or you could keep it this way just so you can have the fun of complaining to and threatening Mr. Squiggly-Line.  Ooh, Mr. Squiggly-Line hyphenates.  Doesn’t that usually mean he’s pompous and…[Read more]

@rochellaine I was talking about how it puts a line under, Kerkin and Cele, my characters names. But I was kinda talking to the squiggly line… So I probably should have just tagged it.
Yes, word war. I’m behind on Nano. Are you on the Nano site? Are you doing Nano? I can’t remember, sorry.

@squiggly-line Stop appearing under my character…[Read more]