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BlueJay replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
I gotta to do this. *breaks into song*
Let it go, let it go!
Can’t hold it back anymore.
Let it go, let it go!
Turn away and slam the door.
I don’t care what they’re going to say.
Let the storm rage on.
The cold never bothered me anyway.Sorry, I just had to do that. *Hits the submit button and goes away singing at the top of her voice.*
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BlueJay posted an update 10 years, 3 months ago
Not that I speak in regard to need,
for I have learned in whatever
state I am, to be content:
I know how to live humbly, and
I know how to live in prosperity.
Everywhere and in all things I have
learned both to be full and to be
hungry, both to abound and to
suffer need.I can do all things through
Christ who strengthens me.~ Philippians 4:11-13
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BlueJay replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
What about Battle Shield? @hope
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Whoopee Laptop is back up and running. I will be able to write again *Crows loudly while dancing around wildly* @kate-flournoy, @daeus 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
…
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… A Name Concealed?
*seven million winky faces*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
Hey I got the reference @Hope!!!!!!!! *dances gleeful jig*
Hidden Promises?
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
@anna-brie I know…those ones aren’t very good. But nothing is clicking.
@gretald The problem with Legend of the Shield was that I discovered it was actually the title of some comic series. 😉 And nothing just seems to be snapping. And the way my book’s theme has changed, The Final Clash really doesn’t fit anymore.
That’s a good point, @kate-fl…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
@anna-brie I know…those ones aren’t very good. But nothing is clicking.
@gretald The problem with Legend of the Shield was that I discovered it was actually the title of some comic series. 😉 And nothing just seems to be snapping. And the way my book’s theme has changed, The Final Clash really doesn’t fit anymore.
That’s a good point, @kate-fl…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@Daeus it’s great fun. Only problem is, I have to curb my enthusiasm and remember that the reader doesn’t want to be info dumped on every single awesome thing about all my amazingly intricate cities. 😉 Some things only I will ever know.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@Daeus no sweat. 😉 It didn’t stop me. *evilest of evil laughs*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Ack! I meant 1,172! 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
1.172 words edited, @Daeus. I’m working on this really cool city that my MC had to pass through in the process of escaping from spies. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Hahaha! Forget it.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@Daeus count me in.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
Hoo boy. Let’s see @Hope.
*Thinks*
Nope, can’t think of anything.
Therefore, I will proceed to rant. Feel free to ignore.
Actually, I’m more like mumbling to myself because I hate myself for not being able to think of anything clever. 😛
So I’m wondering, why exactly is it you want clashing in the title? I get that it has to do with the…[Read more] -
Greta replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
I like the Final Clash, and honestly, I like “Legend of the Shield.” I know you must have had reasons for renaming the book, but those are the ones I like. Sorry, I’m probably not being helpful. :/ Let me see if I can think of any other titles…
What about “Legend of the Clashing Shield?” Or maybe “The Clash of Kingdoms?” I don’t know… -
Hope Ann started the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
There’s a lot of truth to a quote I once saw, at least in my own life: One either gets a title right the first time, or they spend weeks or months agonizing over it. Or, in my case, years.
So, there’s this book I’m working on. Originally it was called Legend of the Shield, then The Shield and Spear. It’s most recent title is The Final Clash. I’m…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Animal Farm in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
I find the ‘media side’ of the story interesting. The twisting of the story about different farmers and Snowball to make sure there is always someone everyone is upset with. Since the animals are given someone to blame, they don’t look closer to home at the real reason of their trials. And, through all the stories told about all the ‘enemies’ of…[Read more]
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