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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@kate-flournoy @daeus I won’t be able to write for I don’t know how long. My laptop has gone in for repairs so I well…sniff…I think you understand. *starts to cry bitter tears* Try not to have too many wonderful conversations without me. *Wave to you all* Bye. 🙁
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hi, from the Deeper South in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 3 months ago
@Timothy-Young thrice welcome!!! We’re always glad to get new nut-cases here on this forum. Are you a nut-case? If you aren’t, you soon will be. *evil laugh* 😉
What do you write?
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Greta replied to the topic Hi, from the Deeper South in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 3 months ago
@Timothy-Young, Welcome to Kingdom Pen! Glad to have you on the forum. 🙂
I’m another homeschooler! *high fives all around*
That’s awesome that you and your family are missionaries.
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Greta replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
@Hope I really like Crowned Powerless. I don’t know; it just sounds fierce and final. 😉 And I don’t think it’s necessarily a bad thing if you have a title that is the same as another book’s title. As long as it fits the story. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Hey, that’s cool @Daeus! 😀
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Greta replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@Bluejay Why, thank you, Kind Lady. *grabs sundae and slurps it down* 😛 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@Bluejay that’s okay, I don’t think Daeus is writing tonight either.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy I won’t be able you join you when you write today, I’m going LARPing. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Hey, don’t worry. I’m nice. Or at least I can be. 😉 There’ll always be something that needs tweaking. It’s part of the learning curve.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
Take all the time you need, @hope . Pick the one that clicks with your story and what you want the reader to expect from it. If you don’t love either of these then maybe you’ll think of one you do … probably when you’ve just turned out your light to go to bed and got into a comfortable spot.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
Perhaps I could go the other way and do something about undiscovered power…hidden power…true power. Hmm, I’ll have to go muse on that a bit.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
@overcomer and @kate-flournoy Crowned Powerless is growing on me too. Though I’m still not sure. I’m not getting too many positive responses to these titles, with Powerless still being ranked twice as high as any other name. *sighs* But that is what I want to know now, so I don’t publish a book with a cheesy or weird title.
This novel has given…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
@hope , Powerless Fate and Powerless Name are the only two out of the first list that really seem to make sense. I don’t think power is shattered, or powerless, though I suppose it could be crowned. 🙂
I prefer Powerless Crown to Crowned Powerless. The latter sounds kinda interesting, but then it gets a little confusing since it sounds…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
Hm, to be honest, I don’t particularly care for any of those. They just sound odd to say aloud. Except Crowned Powerless— I actually really like that one.
I’m afraid I still don’t have any genius suggestions. :/
Fallen Crown
Broken Crown
Crown of the Nameless
Worthless Crown
Crown of the Broken KingCrowned Powerless is growing on me though.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
And if you guys think they are all awful, just tell me. I’d rather know now than later. 😉
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
@bluejay my favorite right now is Shattered Power.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
My favourite is Crowned Powerless. @hope Or Powerless Name. 🙂
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Titles…again in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 3 months ago
I’ve been messing around with the word ‘powerless’ and here are a few ideas I’ve come up with:
Powerless Power
Crowned Powerless
Shattered Power
Powerless Fate
Powerless NameThoughts?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
Wait, that’s not don’t stress and I will. That’s don’t stress!!!!!!!!!!! And I will have fun. 🙂 *reads over words, that’s better* Hits submit button.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 3 months ago
okay @kate-flournoy. Don’t stress. And I will. 😀
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