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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@Bluejay I am. Hope I’m not too late. I can go till nine.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
is anyone around for writing with me in ten minutes? @c-c-lane; @overcomer; @kate-flournoy; @daeus
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Edwin Brook in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus That sounds great. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@Writefury I know, I was so sad to miss Archie in that one. 🙁
And I feel I should mention that Mutiny (or is it Retribution?) also has some very suggestive moments between two minor characters. Classic scenario of pretty woman gets captured, decides to seduce her captor to get what she wants. It was very minor and very easily skipped, but be on…[Read more]
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@kate-flournoy The Duchess and the Devil is the one you’re referring to, I believe. And that’s actually my favorite one… *hides* because Archie. Archie is sad. Archie is wonderful.
That one wasn’t too bad in my opinion. There was one kind of suggestive moment… I think that was about it. But as far as blood and violence goes, it was pretty…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Element and Weather stones in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 2 months ago
@C-C-Lane got it. 😉
I think that’s a fantastic idea though. Very cool!
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
I LOVE, love, love Robin Hood stories! If you need any help reading it when you’re done, @bluejay , you know where to find me. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
I am writing a story about Robin Hood’s daughter, Jenny Hood. It is a fictional story but I’m basing mine upon a movie about Robin Hood, so I’m using those characters. It’s lots of fun. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
I am writing a story about Robin Hood’s daughter, Jenny Hood. It is a fictional story but I’m basing mine upon a movie about Robin Hood, so I’m using those characters. It’s lots of fun. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
That’s great, @bluejay ! 🙂 I’m not exactly sure how much, since I did it on paper and I’m actually going to scrap most of it, but I rewrote some of the beginning stuff I’d already written for my novel, made some notes for changes, (because the characters storyline changed some since I wrote it) and mostly figured out how I don’t want it. So, a…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Haha. @overcomer. *waves hi* I got 309 words written. How’d you go?
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Okay, sort of, @bluejay . I can’t actually see you … okay, I’ll go start writing now.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Sweet, @bluejay ! “LET’S DO THIS THING!” (If you haven’t seen Ratatouille you really should) 😉
See you in 15! 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Sweet, @bluejay ! “LET’S DO THIS THING!” (If you haven’t seen Ratatouille you really should) 😉
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BlueJay replied to the topic Word Lists Results in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@his-instrument That is awesome. I’ll probably post the list in the very near future. I promise to tag you.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@overcomer 15 minutes will be awesome for me.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Hey, who’s up for writing for 15 minutes? Why the short time, you ask? Because I have to get up early tomorrow and I’m really really not looking forward to it. (That is, the getting up part.) 😉 @kate-flournoy , @daeus , @c-c-lane
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Hope Ann started the topic Element and Weather stones in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 2 months ago
So I’ve these element/weather stones in a story I’m working on. The elements are connected to certain weathers and colors. I’m just wondering if you can think of any elements or major weather pattern I’ve missed.
Fire = storms
Water = rain
Air = wind
Earth = heat
Ice = snowWhat do you think? 🙂
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Edwin Brook in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 2 months ago
My thoughts so far are that it is absolutely amazing and absolutely terrible.
Oh boy, I can so relate to that!
And I’d love to edit this book. I’m good for stage one or two. I tend to focus on characters, emotion, and plot…though I can point out rough or awkward wordings too.
As for a critique swap, you have critiqued a novel of…[Read more]
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