Hannah

@mariposa *chokes on her left-over Christmas gingerbread and faints into the eggnog*

Oh wow… I… I don’t even know what to say…

@Winter-Rose I love how you tied it together at the beginning and end; nice work. 😀

Overall, I think it’s pretty strong. I do think you could cut this one line: Before he can drop the mission killers close in, confronting him with a choice. Will he run from the men who want Amy dead, or will he remain and risk repeating a past defeat he wishes…[Read more]

@dekreel I joined August 2016ish. So I guess a year and a half now. Though it feels like an eternity. I’ve been writing for 3 and 1/2 years. Maybe 4… *shrug*

@winter-rose I know! I was looking through those ancient posts…time travel can exist, can’t it. XD

(not writing yet)

DRAGON SNAPPER’S CHAIR 1

@Dekreel @winter-rose Anyone else wondering. Man this was a long time ago. Back then I melted chairs too.

@winter-rose *props chin on fist and looks up at you with enormous, adoring brown eyes* When I grow up, I wanna write like you.

That. Was. Awesome.

@winter-rose I have to head out now. 😀 I wrote 733…

@winter-rose XD So are puppies. And all little things. 😀

One minute their cuddling, and the next they’re chasing nothing. Maybe their tails.

@winter-rose Aw, kittens. 🙂

@winter-rose Quiet well. 😀 Gearing up for 2018 (whaaa?) And you?

@winter-rose I am here! 😀

@jenwriter17 Yeah…that’s a ways a way from me too, although I have heard of it before…

I find this conversation very depressing. 😉

Okay….soooooo.
I actually think that everyone else covered it. The one kill-dragon scene I wrote was terrible–perhaps I should have asked this question myself.

Besides, I can’t give away information on how to take down my comrades.

@supermonkey42 @sam-kowal @inkling-for-christ The Ice cream and raspberries were originally made popular by Daeus, just because he loved them and made mention of them at random times. I incorporated that into the LOKD, which is the first (as far as I know) of the Kapeefer Literature. 😀

Does that answer your question?

@dragon-snapper I am neck-deep in school assignments right now and wading through a pile of books I desperately want to read, so at the present moment I’m afraid I’ll have to decline. I’m glad you have enough though! Sorry I didn’t reply sooner- for some reason email kicked it into spam, even though I thought I fixed that. *scowls at technology in…[Read more]

@Introvert_girl good question. I haven’t given this a ton of thought, but my gut says you would have to acknowledge to the reader that this is different.

You can’t let the new characters try to fill the shoes of the old ones; it won’t work. You should make it clear that this is their story now… and that the world has changed to need them as…[Read more]

@bethanysinkyroses heyyyyyyy, welcome back! I was wondering where you went. 😀

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@daeus

We were no match for Dragon Snapper.

That’s my favorite line.

Listen and learn @ethryndal