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@anne-of-lothlorien I really like the present tense in this. *waits for random answer*

@Aratrea lol

All right @That_Writer_Girl_99 read through the document, and left a comment in one place, but otherwise you did good. 😀 You’re handling Matthias with more subtlety. *thumbs up*

Have you figured out your plot problems? Any way I can help you?

@BethanySinkyRoses welcome aboard, new KeePer! 😀 Look forward to seeing you around.

(@aratrea I hope you know that profile picture makes you impossible to take seriously. XD)

@gideon-sowdon Aye, he did.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 no, you’re doing and have done great. Just last I checked you were having problems with the plot, and that’s the one thing that really hangs me up when I struggle with that.
*cough* I suppose you can ignore that bit of advice then. 😉

@That_Writer_Girl_99 quick tip: look at your different character motivations. Each character is the hero of his or her own story. What are they aiming for? What is it they want? Kara’s not going to be the only one moving the plot. Each person’s life is an entire story. You chose to tell those stories through Kara’s eyes, but they’re still separate…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 I promise I haven’t forgotten you. I’m really busy right now so I will get to this as soon as possible, but it may be a bit. 😉

@That_Writer-Girl_99 I promise I haven’t forgotten you. I’m really busy right now so I will get to this as soon as possible, but it may be a bit. 😉

@daeus *screams and hides in piles of gold*

@Winter-Rose I’m really glad it’s helpful. 😀

@ETHRYNDAL remember I wailed on this thread that Thorin didn’t have the Arkenstone with him in the funeral-ish scene? On page 3. But we finished watching BotFA a little bit ago, and HE DID HAVE IT! It was on him; he was sort of holding it. Peter Jackson, I apologize for yelling about that. I was wrong. It was THERE INDEED! This makes me so…[Read more]

Aha, there we go.

Part Two

It was no nowhere in sight. — it says ‘no nowhere’

out you!” My grandpa yelled from the dining room. — ‘My’ = ‘my’

Don’t worry, it get’s worse. — ‘get’s’ = ‘gets’

throwing open it’s doors — ‘it’s’ = ‘its’

My mother want’s me — ‘want’s’ = ‘wants’

need to go home,” Liam eased — period after ‘home’

the door for you,” L…

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No success. I’ll try it in two parts.

@Winter-Rose Aw, thanks. 😀 I am a detail oriented person, so that’s probably the difference. (Likely something in the difference between a Perceiver and a Judger. I’m a most definite J. 😉 )
Here we are.

Part One

“Thanks captain obvious,” She retreated to the fridge once again. — period after ‘ob…

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@anne-of-lothlorien Um…or two. 😀

@BethanySinkyRoses Hey! Welcome here. 🙂 My oldest sister’s name is Elizabeth. 😀

Ergh, it’s not putting out my edited post…I’ll try again in a minute.

@Winter-Rose Aw, thanks. 😀 I am a detail oriented person, so that’s probably the difference. (Likely something in the difference between a Perceiver and a Jugder. I’m a most definite J. 😉 )
Here we are.

Part One

“Thanks captain obvious,” She retreated to the fridge once again. — period after ‘obvious’

details,” She said. — ‘she’…

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@Daeus That is amazingly perfect. Did you color it?
You should put that as the header for Josiah’s video series or something…opening picture in the video, something. 😛