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@GracieGirl Whoo-HOO! *claps you on the shoulder* It’ll be all right. XD Who was your favorite?
But I’m gonna say, wait till you read Les Mis. It’s even better. (Though a different sort of story, I know.)

@jess I’m back!

I’m going to go make dinner now. I edited two chapters, and got an idea for a way to fix the analogy. Thanks everyone!

@winter-rose Augh! I know. Writing it was so much more fun that sitting and using red pens.

@audrey-caylin @that_writer_girl_99 Actually, it’s already finished. You could say I’m editing the first draft. It stands at about 83,000 words, though I have major tweaking to do, because like you, Audrey, I have to incorporate some Christian themes into this thing, making it partway analogy. That has to be hardest part of this book. 😛

*raises hand* First draft!

@that_writer_girl_99 *looks at you suspiciously* Do you not like fried chicken?

@that_writer_girl_99 Dragons like to eat fried chicken. Dragons like to eat ice cream. Dragons love to have fried chicken and ice cream in the same day.

@winter-rose Yep. Still taking as much criticism as I can get. 😛

@daeus Hello!
@winter-rose I am editing my novel, and might move on to edit my contest story, then I shall brainstorm.

@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!

@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!

@winter-rose I think we posted at the same time… 😛

I am editing for a while if anyone is out there. @daeus @audrey-caylin @winter-rose @ethryndal @jess @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @graciegirl @jenali

@Alia Poor guardian angel. 😛
Yes, I’ll be praying.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 that is a GREAT midpoint. So right now what you’re looking for seems to be a first plot point— where Kara commits to action. What about Blake? Was he taken in the fight with the Catastrophes? Or did he use it as a distraction to infiltrate the prison and get caught or something? If that’s the case Matthias could have gotten…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 perhaps you should try mapping out Kara’s arc in detail and going from there?

@Ethryndal I know. My impeccable memory and attention to detail must have failed me then. *hangs head in shame*

I was so happy to be proven incorrect though. XD

@Daeus Oh, I knew she drew it, I just saw it colored in your version. Cool. Effects.