Adry_Grace

*pulls out sword pen and sticks it behind her ear* How can I help?

@That_Writer_Girl_99

Oooooh, I like it!

There is one thing that could use tweaking though. Both Kara and Matthias seem a little scattered and unfocused as to their emotional state. Now they’re supposed to be; I know. They’re both confused. But the reader shouldn’t be. It’s not that both of them shouldn’t be struggling with several different emotions at once, but that…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 don’t think so. Heading over there now.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *appears in a poof of elvish stardust**adjusts Jedi robes* You wanted to talk about chapter seven?

@Jess-Penrose I love your profile picture and the quote!!!

1. Blackened Rose
2. Bloodstained Crown
3. Broken Seal

Definitely.

@Hope

@Hope I like @Dragon-Snapper‘s suggestions, but I also think your three aren’t as terrible as they could be.
Except for the last.
Which is rubbish.
Excuse me.
*coughs* 😛

But you had a good thing going there with the different wars. If you could think of a third war to make that last one fit, I don’t think that would be so terribly wretched.…[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper same to you! *breathes fire(works)*

@Dragon-Snapper yes. That too. XD

You know you’re a writer when you set passwords to the most un-spellable un-pronounceable location names in the obscurest places of your fantasy world, which even if by a miracle someone was to find and pick the right one they’d never remember how to spell it. XD

@anne-of-lothlorien I opened the one you sent me in email, chose the option to copy the link, pasted the link here, highlighted it, chose the link option in the little toolbar, and changed the text. 🙂

Is it working on your end? It’s still working on mine.

@anne-of-lothlorien @daeus

Is it working on your end? It’s still working on mine.

On page 7… I attached a link. Here, I’ll do it again… it’s working over here.

Count of Monte Cristo & Daeus

Hey, I think I got it!

@anne-of-lothlorien

Testing

This is a test…