Allison

@theshadow lolllllll

that’s gonna be weird

@theshadow

It looks good! I don’t have any major critiques. It is a very short chapter, but it does a good job of building on the tension. Also, I like the way you described the trees.

It seems a little weird that Olivia and Adeline and Dylan don’t seem to care about their families… well, maybe Dylan a little bit.

@freed_and_redeemed

Love it!!

Also was not expecting Erich! I need to know how he joined the American army!!!

Or if we can’t do Slack find another free platform where we can have separate channels/forums to keep everything organized

I’m half-tempted just to create our own Slack community at this point. Since (i think) we all trust each other. And then only people we know can get in (no more stalkers XP).

Because if KP was just abandoned, then we’ve got our own little writing community that will live on

Idk 🤷🏻‍♀️ Just an idea…

@koshka true, true.

btw what exactly is a gork?

@dekreel

Aw, thank you!! That made my day!! 🥹☺️💛

@theducktator oh yeah

I don’t remember the aftermath that well. I remember the storm (thankfully our house wasn’t damaged) but not about what went on afterward.

@theducktator yeah I’m in Florida. The one that hit last year in October?

@theducktator oh.

That is concerning.

I didn’t know that.

Which hurricane was it?

also your poem is hilarious

@rae ahahahaha

I’m sorry that happened to you.

@ellette-giselle aww man that’s horrible!

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhhh nooooooo! Ellette! I’m so sorry! That’s terrible!

I’m glad LOS was okay… but I’m really sorry about your WIP. That’s terrible.

I use Word Online (microsoft365.com, I think…) to write, and it saves online so I can access it through my phone and other devices. That might be worth looking into for the future, since I’m pre…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle My brother, whose hair goes down to his neck, tucks his hair behind his ears all the time. We actually had to tell him to do it less cause my mom doesn’t want him to push on the back of his ears every time he does it.

@theshadow

AHAHAHAHAHA

(or whatever Snipes’ laugh is like)

even the posts about me being a simp??? Lol

@freed_and_redeemed Love it!!

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @anyone-else

and Part 3 (and I might share more from what would be the next scene too, but this is the end of the exact scene I’ve been sharing)

A vaguely familiar masculine voice…not very familiar, but familiar regardless.

A blue-eyed, blonde-haired man in a US Army unifor…

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@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @anyone-else

Part 2 of the scene I shared🤭 (and this still isn’t all of it…still working on it atm)

Franz’s gaze didn’t stray from Riker’s. “I thought you were dead…we all did.”

Riker’s back pressed against the wall.

He should never have left the Altmann home in a rush.

E…

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@whalekeeper lol the rock one

noooo pikachu don’t do it

I wanna say my characters are not glowsticks, but then I realized that one of them is kind of a literal glowstick cause he has a few light-up scales on his body that are bright enough to shine through his clothes. And he has a traumatized life to match (although that wasn’t really my…[Read more]