Allison

@savannah_grace2009

Ah. That is very good news!

also, do still tag me!! I still am reading your story, I just don’t usually have a lot to say though cuz I’m a bad editor. But I am still reading. 😊

OH! Ellette, you’re gonna be so happy… ( @theducktator and @grcr might also want to know this)

I have a recent development…

Cass is no longer going to be playing with Sef’s feelings.

He’s officially a nice guy again hahaha

Since Lilitu and Sef are separated for a good chunk of the book, there’s no opportunity for this to happen. Cass is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @anyone-else

Next chapter!!!

What am I doing?

Frustration built up in Lilitu’s chest until he wanted to scream.

But he couldn’t scream….or else Adar would find him.

Cass isn’t going to come bail you out this time, he pressed his lips together in a thin line. You have to figure it out yourself.

He tried to find a comfort…

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@theshadow okay! I’ll be sure to share that with my family tonight.

Honestly, they probably are helping because they’re more light hearted and fun.

haha thanks.

(Not me trying to look up encouraging quotes from the squad but all I get is them insulting each other as always….lol)

I’m a third of the way through and I already have a lot of thoughts, so that’s good! I really like Tyn, by the way, favorite character.

@ellette-giselle

I will!!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay great!!! hahaha!

Really??? That makes me really happy!!!! Thank you!!!! <3

Speaking of Eloy, I just wrote a funny Eloy scene (it’s kind of cheesy I think, but I’m going to edit it later.) I’ll post it in a little bit!!!

@anyone y’all want a villain rant?

also no context whatsoever hehe

“….I would’ve killed your little flightless twins, of course. Suffocated them in my coils before they knew what was happening.” she said, continuing from some time before we’d come in. She didn’t notice us there. “I would’ve loved to watch the look on your face when I came to…

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@keilah-h

ty 🥹

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

I’m glad you liked it! And I’m glad it seemed more realistic than you thought it was going to be, that’s great. Yeah, not a fan of the outfit but I’m glad it was mostly in the trailer.

Yeah the whole tough girl thing is really interesting. It’s weird, but I have a theory to why it happens. For multiple issues, I think…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @jonas (let me know if I’m tagging you too much, I know you’re probably busy!!!!) this goes for anyone else too, please let me know if you’d like me to stop tagging you lol @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Here’s a second half of the Lilitu chapter:

(Again, this is unedited so this won’t be the finished product, this is…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have some cracked or broken ribs (which could damage internal organs), and/or a concussion. And if he was knocked out/unconscious for long…

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@ellette-giselle yeah, “girl power” and whatnot is kinda way overblown these days.

Although in the past in many cultures, women were not exactly treated nicely (or sometimes even like people) either, so I think as a society we just kinda vacillate between “too much power” or “too little power” given to them.

not that that’s right, but it’s just…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle lol

I mean, I don’t get the “it’s not Christmasy” thing, If it occurs during Christmas and has themes of Christmas, it is a Christmas movie. I’ve never seen it, but I just looked it up, and if you’re gonna call it “not a Christmas movie” then you might say the same for Home Alone or The Sound of Music, which are also popular…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I think we’ve all heard you rant about this topic lol

I mean, most of us have female fighter/warrior/soldier/whatever characters for some reason. So we were bound to get the “this is why I don’t quite believe in that” talk (which I don’t think is bad and might actually help us improve our characters)

(another slight…

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@linus-smallprint

Yes, the humans are upset, this just hasn’t been the focus of the story, and with other things to focus on, such as getting rid of the monster, Alan or worries about Iskyagus, this has not been shown much. I can add some subtle hints later that humans are upset about this. Lyens have so far prevailed over the humans, which they u…

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@theducktator thanks!

@whalekeeper haha yep

@mineralizedwritings yessssss good for you girl!!

if you ever make a manga comic of your writing I would totally read it.

@keilah-h

XD yeah that’s probably it! Manga/anime without the weirdness is what I’m all about.

@linus-smallprint

I think it is high time I read through everything, that way you get a perspective from someone who doesn’t have to wait for each section and reads it in roughly a couple sittings. 👍