@acancello
Active 1 year, 9 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy had to choke down a snort. She took the piano lid and pulled. It was heavy but had no hinges. It fell off with a thunderous boom. She scampered back, lost her balance, and sat down suddenly. Dust rose and she let out two sharp sneezes.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
@rae thank you! My dad said the same so it looks like this is a keeper!
My prose is weird lol. I kept it in my style (sorta like my fanfic) but I also wanted to inject a bit of the style from books I like.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
BAhaha XD
I think it’s safe to say this is a weird place and there can be weird random objects scattered within. Maybe that says something about the labyrinth masters, not so much the piano itself.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
“You’ve…” Lucy trailed off, brow furrowing. She clacked her fingers over the keys and tried to play a folk song, but only knew a few seconds of it.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
“Dunno why they’d put a piano in here. I wonder who they are.” Lucy couldn’t tell if they had returned to ground level – after taking the door that led into earth – or if they were in the labyrinth’s basement. The floor had sloped slightly as they walked, sometimes up and sometimes down. Even here, her internal compass was…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
That was lovely. Your descriptions are so pretty, and it’s such a tight piece of short fiction. Hopefully you don’t regret posting it anymore because we appreciated reading it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
You guys can comment on the doc. If you haven’t seen me update it in a while, badger me into writing more (preferably here rather than there) lol
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Keilah H. started the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
yep, it’s just a prologue and part of 1 chapter right now but hey! I actually did it!
here ya go if you wanna read it:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-8Up1XMYeuBavdafSNez1AVIVX4v6inMa9Q4gXBeYpY/edit?usp=sharing
Now, to those who have read my fanfic, it does have identical species names to them, but know that the Argonites, Salamandrion,…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
Lucy bent her right arm and flexed, her confidence incidentally boosted. “Mm-hm. Good.”
Short reply because I figured Gabriel will lead us on
Yeah, big-sibling little-kid energy but also mentor-follower. Lu doesn’t have siblings either and she’s mentally associating this with adults she knows. If she becomes Barnes again,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 8 months ago
@whalekeeper BRUH THE MEMES LOLLL
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Thank you! ♥️ It seems I felt well enough to write something just now, haha. Energy when you’re ill is so inconsistent.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
The darkness was warm and comfortable in comparison to the outdoors, where they had wandered in the clammy mist for so long. Protector’s blades glowed like light through rose-colored glass. He turned them over in his hands and his hair lit up, twice as red, almost artificial.
His question finally registered. Lucy shrugged. She h…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 8 months ago
I’ve made this one specially to represent me

I try to stick to the middle ground, but occasionally I forget and it’s the funniest thing ever
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 8 months ago

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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
oh me goodness I’m so bored.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @theducktator @someoneelse?I’mforgetful
Marcel
Marcel wasn’t entirely sure how to lead the group. He had never led a team larger than half a dozen people in this place before. Still, it was only a game and it wasn’t the end of the world if he suggested something wrong.
He rolled his shoulders and crossed his arms…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
That works with me!
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
The best way to introduce the characters to each other might be when they sit down to eat. Not talking for an entire feast would be pretty awkward
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