Allison

@theshadow better “subjects” than “children” I suppose, especially considering how I talk about some of them. (not sure whether to glare or smirk at the characters in question here)

@rae

Well, this certain rude character, if they get too much on my nerves, will be the topic of a short story in which they DIE. That is how I deal with rude characters i dislike.

LOLLLLL

Should I be glad none of my characters ticked you off……?

actually it’d be funnier if they did…..

SOLDIER! MEDIC! YOUR TIME HAS COME, DO SOMETHING…[Read more]

@jonas

Thank you again for your help!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Alright then, got it! I guess I’ll make a lot faster progress than I thought then!

@jonas

whoaaaa

that was a lot 😅😅

thank you for all your help, it is appreciated!!

however, I’m not looking for so much of a detailed critique as I have in the past. This is still a really rough draft and I know there’s a lot of messy sentences and chapters. I’m mostly looking for critiques to see if the pacing is good and if it makes more…[Read more]

@linis-smallprint

yes, this is the same book that you started before. I did revise it a lot though 😂😂😅

@savannah_grace2009

Gorgeous boards!! 🥰 What program did you use?

@elishavet-pidyon Wow! That was fun.

funny side note, when you mentioned “reaching the Dell” I was like “someone else knows that word????” cause I never see it in anyone else’s writing these days, but I have a charrie named Dell so I see it often. LOL

@godlyfantasy12 hellooooo again!

haven’t seen ya in a hot minute!

So you’re not really writing much, yes. But please tell me all the characters and stuff are still around.

Crosshair will never say it, but I think he’s been missing his feathery buddy Paxton.

in other news, I finished a fanfic for once, which has a new story…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’m pretty sure it’s the same book.

@rae awesome!!!!

Can’t wait for more!

Feedback time lol

Indeed, the fire showed his features mostly came from his human side, besides his grey eyes. His grey eyes were deep and filled with emotion

You don’t need to reference the eyes again. A better way of doing it would be like this:

…besides his gray eyes, deep and filled with…

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@savannah_grace2009

Alright, here we go!

Prologue

Rolling clouds blotted out any sight of the twin moons, and tendrils of fog floated in on a frigid breeze, curling up and around the two lone figures in the street.

Had a man been so unfortunate as to look out upon the street through the frosty panes as the two walked by, the sight would have…

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@everyone

Thank you sooo much <3

@esther-c

Ahhh I know…I love himmmm

@theducktator
Okay, I will hahahaha XDXD

@ellette-giselle

I tried to make one for Eloy but I’m not feeling it…I never write from his POV so it’s hard to get a good vibe and inspiration lol

Eloy and Cass kind of just disappeared off the face of the planet XD

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Yayyy! Augh, blisters are the worst. 😒

@theducktator

Oof, a tale of two cities… 😅 That book was hard to understand. I barely remember what happened in it 😖

Y’all…I’m a sophomore, but I just turned 15 in November 😂 I can’t even start learning to drive until the end of Mayyy 😭

@savannah_grace2009

They look great, I love them!

@savannah_grace2009

OOOOooooo I like them!!! They look so gooooooood!!

@savannah_grace2009

Marky boiiii 🥰🥰

I love them!!! I really like how you used quotes but typed them out so they match the board theme!

Okay but this one….I feel personally attacked XDXD

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator

^^^