Allison

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

@rae awww! Baron trying to play with the girls was so cute!!

also I agree with Ellette’s suggestion.

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

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Perhaps I’ll share it on here if i ever follow through with anything…

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@keilah-h

Hmm, I will remember to choose a fork for a weapon next time someone throws me into a tournament.

@koshka

All people are weird in their own way, some more dramatically than others. It’s the “normal” ones that usually scare me.

Those are the kinds of people who are average and forgettable enough to be spies, you see.

@loopylin

Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨

<3

@ellette-giselle

Loopy never seemed weird to me.

Oh she’s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper lollllll

I think I’m the oddest one out of my real life friend group, although I do have a friend who knows several ways to kill someone with a fork.

@ellette-giselle Whoops, didn’t mean I wanted to whack you specifically.

Sorry.

Except @loopylin

She’s an absolute weirdo, don’t know what to make of her

@koshka @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

I was plopped into this world with many weird friends – a pyrotechnician and a chronic tea drinker among them – so the people on here are pretty normal in my eyes.

@koshka yep that’s us

@ellette-giselle good! We’re your friends, even if we disagree occasionally and feel like we wanna reach through the screen and whack each other. lol

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

true.

It’s just strange that we talk about these kinds of things as if we’ve actually gone through them ourselves. Crazy.

writer life!! lol

@keilah-h I mean, that’s what I had assumed. So your thoughts aren’t too crazy. Unless I’m crazy, of course.

@theducktator

But why though.

Becuuuuuzzzzz Eric isn’t a worse guy than Edmund or Eustace were. He’s cowardly, but he cares about his sister. So there. Humph.

whoa, that was a weird sentence.

why do I talk about this kinda stuff?

@ellette-giselle I’m assuming that means all children are artificially incepted and grown either through surrogates or laboratories, or that two people are only allowed to get together through the leaders’ consent and split up afterward, and they keep tabs on the female. Because simply outlawing marriage and letting people run around having…[Read more]

@grcr oooh a comic, even a short one, would be so cool!

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper lollllll

speaking of fan works, did you ever get around to reading mine?

@the_lost-journal can’t say I disagree on hating fandoms sometimes….

you got the great people with awesome fan art and fics, and then you got the people who shouldn’t be allowed to have a pencil.