Allison

@theshadow

Okay, good. Eh, it’s just part of his personality to me. He’s great at Warrain and leading the team, because he applies himself, and as a result doesn’t really focus on school. 😆 His skills with computers and coding will be more prominent later.

Yep! Though Sara and Cole will still carry most of the story. I believe Alec’s next ch…[Read more]

*Subscribes* I’ll comment more on this later, but I need to sleep.

I don’t want to skip Barnes’ class, or her own exhaustion will be all for naught.

@koshka @raxforge @loopylin

Sorry guys, this is all on me. I’ll try to move the scene forward after a good sleep. (It’s night here.) I’ve been sick for a while and it takes a long time for my sleep cycle to recover, so I’m always tired. O⁠_⁠o

@godlyfantasy12 heyyyy welcome back!!! Glad you’re back to writing your story. I don’t exactly have the time to give feedback yet, but I will TOTALLY be back tomorrow.

@theshadow

Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school?

You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.

Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰

By the way, are you planning to post a new chapter of your WIP soon? I’m looking forward…[Read more]

!!! PROGRAM HACKED!!!

“Welcome, my tater-tot munchers.

Today, we have been prosecuted by the world. Those who believe our cause to be tasteless have cast an iron grip upon our communications. They broadcast to all, painting us as villains for liking quality food.

Today, I ask you to rise up. This world is in need of a revolution. Eat mashed p…[Read more]

I still really like the name A’Grend for a kingdom

@godlyfantasy12 Notifs have been really bad, so I’ll notif you here. I messaged you on my profile :]

@godlyfantasy12

I’m glad to see you writing again! Sometimes it can feel like such a chore. ❤️ But I think it just takes some time. I’ve also been helping Loops (a teensy-weensy bit) and I’ve thought about reading through the whole roleplay. Even if we weren’t the best writers, and we still aren’t, it’s still fun.

@linus-smallprint

I’m going to try and look at all of this when possible.

I’m sorry for replying to everyone and possibly being annoying, but you all are making sense of something I wasn’t able to make sense of myself…..

so yeah that’s a thing.

@linus-smallprint Measuring how long one arm is and using that as a baseline for the other one helps me. Also, the arms tend to end toward the bottom of the hip, with the hands extending a little farther than that.

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for the extra ideas. I bet I can make a list of things to focus on with line thickness.

Nice drawing!! I always like how dedicated you are with the textures, such as the wood and brick floor. that takes more patience than I have at this time.
I agree with Keilah on both those points. Another thing – Alan’s left arm might…[Read more]

@theducktator

but having parents read my cringey emotional or romantic scenes…*shudders*

YES. THIS.

@esther-c

Tbh, I don’t share my writing with my parents until it’s in a final or almost final draft stage. The only place I rant about my characters or my writing is really on here or any other writing community. My family knows I write, and I actually used to share a lot of it with my siblings, but now I like giving them the best, not nec…

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