Allison

I’d be down to find/create/start a new KP community thing too… 😃😃

only thing is I don’t think I’d be allowed back on Discord because we had a… scary predatory… moment happen on there… so I don’t know… I’d have to ask… 🙂

I’d be open to creating our own community. Slack would probably work for me, I’d have to check with my parents about Discord since I don’t have it yet. There’s also Group Me… which I don’t know much about, but plenty of youth groups seem to use it for announcements (not sure if you can create mini channels or anything like that.)

@godlyfantasy12

I ammmm

but idk for how much longer, lol

@koshka ooooh that’s a great story. You said it’s from your sister’s book?

that kind of tale is always fun.

@the_lost-journal you’re good!

@esther-c ohhhh ok.

yeah idk if we’d like that, especially with roleplays and stuff.

I don’t even remember my reason for avoiding Discord so I might as well try it out if it comes to that.

@loopylin @keilah-h
I’ve never used Discord, but I’m open to it!! I wasn’t aware you could have separate channels and such.

Keilah, Slack is mostly used for businesses, but I’ve also been a part of a writing camp that uses it and it works pretty well. The only problem is that if we use the free version, the message history is only 90 days.

@ellette-giselle

Yep! I noticed that! 😆 “Teacher.” I like it.

@ellette-giselle

I love the way you put us inside Rolf’s story instead of having him just tell it. It worked so much better. Also, the transitions were great.

Good section. The part about Conrad was sad, though. I don’t really have any big critiques. Great job!

@the_lost-journal aww cute!

It’s spelling “quacking” not “quaking” but that’s all right.

@esther-c @loopylin I’ve avoided Discord for as long as possible (I don’t even remember the reason why) but everyone keeps bringing up reasons that I should have it lol. Never heard of Slack.

@theshadow lolllllll

that’s gonna be weird

@theshadow

It looks good! I don’t have any major critiques. It is a very short chapter, but it does a good job of building on the tension. Also, I like the way you described the trees.

It seems a little weird that Olivia and Adeline and Dylan don’t seem to care about their families… well, maybe Dylan a little bit.

@freed_and_redeemed

Love it!!

Also was not expecting Erich! I need to know how he joined the American army!!!

Or if we can’t do Slack find another free platform where we can have separate channels/forums to keep everything organized

I’m half-tempted just to create our own Slack community at this point. Since (i think) we all trust each other. And then only people we know can get in (no more stalkers XP).

Because if KP was just abandoned, then we’ve got our own little writing community that will live on

Idk 🤷🏻‍♀️ Just an idea…

@koshka true, true.

btw what exactly is a gork?

@dekreel

Aw, thank you!! That made my day!! 🥹☺️💛

@theducktator oh yeah

I don’t remember the aftermath that well. I remember the storm (thankfully our house wasn’t damaged) but not about what went on afterward.

@theducktator yeah I’m in Florida. The one that hit last year in October?

@theducktator oh.

That is concerning.

I didn’t know that.

Which hurricane was it?

also your poem is hilarious