Allison

Also on the first person thing, it might work, but it also might throw everyone off, y’know? It really depends.

@rae

I think his passion is what made him the best fantasy author. If Tolkien didn’t love writing, and didn’t love the story, then it wouldn’t have been a classic. It wouldn’t have been published at all.

That’s exactly what I’m saying. He wrote great stories because he loved writing so much, not because his ability was somehow greater than other writers.

@rae

I’m one of those perfectionists who wants to throw their stuff in the trash everytime they read it just cuz it isn’t as good as Lord of the Rings

I know you’re joking, but has nobody thought about the fact that it must’ve either taken Tolkien like 5 drafts to get it perfect, or he was just the exception to the rule and had everything str…[Read more]

@rae

How’s the editing going so far? I bet you’re super tired by now. XD

@rae @ellette-giselle I’m glad you guys were able to work something out!! I’ve just self-published every time I finished a book, but I have a book on writing and it talks about how to get a publisher, and I was like “wow, this is…..really complicated. Do we really need to do all this?”

@ellette-giselle ikr? Cats are either the sweetest or little terrors, and there isn’t really an in between lol

@ellette-giselle so cute!!

lol

@ellette-giselle

I mean, I love these characters.

So they must suffer, right? 🙄 Lol.

@jonas

I’ll try to check it out! It sounds cool, but I don’t know if I’m ready to sign up for reading another project right now. I’m sure there are some people on here who would, though!

Throwing out some tags…

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom

@ellette-giselle

I still feel like Jonathan’s brother might not be dead, but I know you tried to quench that.

Jonathan was pretty smart, and the Agents wanted him before, so they might try to get him to work for them. Or something. Maybe use Michael as leverage. Or they want them to help them defeat the rebels by taking information… 🫣

@ellette-giselle

They should be on there, but it might take a minute. Sometimes I have to reload mine for it to work.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @theshadow

New chapters!

What are you doing to them?!

No, this is actually really interesting… I wonder what the Agents want with them. Probably nothing good.

@ellette-giselle

Michael seems sweet, lol. I liked him.

evil grin*

Oh, no…

@ellette-giselle

What is Jonathan’s arc supposed to be?

@ellette-giselle

He’s slowly softening to the rebels, and becoming curious about their strength and hope. Also, he apologized.

I just watched Animation vs. Minecraft, and it was super wholesome, I loved it

@whalekeeper I get that lol. I’m pretty chill when it comes to Minecraft too.

…And here I am, praising the game and not talking about Alan Becker. XD I still haven’t watched. Next chance I get, probably this week.

I think some YouTubers make Minecraft way too loud and showy. My brothers watch competitive YouTubers and I’ve never caught on to that. The game by itself is much more impactful.