Allison

@linus-smallprint

I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!

The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.

Bruuuhhh

@ellette-giselle ahhh ok

@rae

I immediately thought of Marlo and Oakley. :]

@ellette-giselle Not sure why you’re so horrified, they’re literally the exact same questions you asked……..

I can confirm, Linus is not an AI, cause if he were, it’d be hard for him to come up with several fantasy races AND keep it consistent throughout. I’ve messed around with generative AI before (although I never use it to write for…[Read more]

I’m kind of behind (and a little stuck at the moment :/) but I’ll hopefully have my fist chunk soon.

@rae

Hmm… maybe Winter? I can’t think of anything else atm.

I like Hybridlore’s suggestion.

@linus-smallprint

ALAN BECKER DOODLES YES I AM NOT ALONE

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! The rebellion is reminding me of the church meetings in my story.

Jonathan’s adjustment is pretty realistic. He’s struggling, but wants to please the people who are teaching him despite himself.

I don’t really know why they can’t just let him go–that was a bit blurry for me. I know he was captured and taken…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, they sound adorable! Sir Fluffyface is such a cute name 🤣

Name them after characters. That’s always a solid choice. 😉

Thunder has a new tail! I didn’t make the model, but I colored the tail.

@rae Do you have any pictures of them?

@linus-smallprint @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper

Four new chapters today! 😳

Don’t feel like you have to read them all right away if you don’t have time. This is the end of Part 2.

@linus-smallprint I see you’re an Alan Becker fan!! My brother loves watching those. They’re so cool.

@whalekeeper lollllll

also as for the character designer thing, it gets updated frequently so I don’t think it was even possible to make characters that detailed several years ago.

But then again, I am very meticulous about my charries, so……

Sometimes I find a huge piece of paper and doodle on it with my siblings. This time I doodled a frog without really looking, and it came out like this.

It’s an absolute monstrosity and now I don’t trust myself to doodle without paying attention

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

I’ve tried using that designer too. Never got to the same level of detail as Keilah’s characters here. 🙂

@ellette-giselle Nope! Nothing that I saw, anyway.

@loopylin

Understandable. It’ll probably take everyone a bit to get in a good rhythm.