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Active 1 year, 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Also…
Look! I found little Hallie!! 🥰

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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.
Chapter 27
Hallie rolled onto her back and let out a sigh, staring at the dark ceiling…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️
OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTONIt’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn
It almost made me cry but…
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Esther replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you!!!!
You are getting so much better at guys and girls!
I’m glad you think that! Been practicing a bit.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 3 weeks ago
I have art, finally! Lol

Chell from the Portal games as she appears in my stories. Also, her brother, a fan character of mine. You might remember him if you’ve seen the Hero Forge image I posted a little while back. His name’s Alex, but he’s referred to by his middle name, Jonathan, because there’s another character that goes by his first n…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months, 3 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 3 weeks ago
She’s not childlike. She’s a phantom of her childhood, dancing on the wind by the power of lunchables and red 40.
lol that’s cool.
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HighScribe posted an update 9 months, 3 weeks ago
I haven’t known what to draw lately so if anyone sees this and wants me to draw their character or something lmk.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@grcr wowwww that looks awesome!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
The cover looks really cool! Who designed the image? Was that you?
I wanted to add that the description on the back looked good, but the last paragraph didn’t give us much hope, if that makes sense. Most of the time in descriptions like that you’ll see something that leaves the reader guessing whether or not something is goi…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months, 3 weeks ago
I feel like their faces are wonky…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay… here it is… hopefully it’s at least a little accurate—I feel like I may have butchered them. If there’s anything you don’t like, let me know—I can change or redo things. 😊😅

I’m so sorry I didn’t draw the combat boots… there were too many feet and I was exhausted. Ignore the hands too—could almost go without saying at t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol
I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll
Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol
Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months, 3 weeks ago
😈😈😈
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Picture is pretty much finished. Will post tomorrow…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Huh, weird. I didn’t do that intentionally, but it might be because you don’t have an account anymore. 🤷
Thank you so much!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@rae That sounds cool!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.
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