Allison

@keilah-h

You’re welcome!! 💛💛

I found out animation isn’t hard, but it is tedious

Ah yes, I agree.

@ellette-giselle

Ohh, I’m sorry. I didn’t know that was a rule. 😅

@ellette-giselle

Oof, yeah, I get that. It is one of the hardest parts about stories, but also one of the things that really makes you love the characters!

I thought it was pretty realistic that the boys would be quick to fight with each other because they are worn out and worried. Sabina’s idea to help them make up was pretty smart. And she g…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yep! lol. I read pretty fast sometimes, but it wasn’t that long of a section. Plus I saw pretty much as soon as you posted it. 😅

@whalekeeper Cool, I’ll check it out.

@ellette-giselle

Aww, I love it!!! 🥰

@keilah-h

I used Simublast, it was the first website I could find that didn’t take forever to load. 😌

@raxforge @freed_and_redeemed

I mean, the topic is very broad. It could be as simple as showing the leaves of a tree withering and dying, or the spiritual death and resurrection of a new believer. It doesn’t necessarily mean you have to show someone dying–and even if you do, there’s a way to handle it in a way that doesn’t glorify…[Read more]

@whalekeeper kind of a cool writer’s choice, everyone sees the lines as from different characters.

also what generator did you use to decide who lives and who dies? I’d love to try it out and see what happens lol

@keilah-h

it could be your character speaking if you want, there’s no confimation so it’s up to the reader.

Yeah totally. I saw the hat line as my own character’s line, since he has a hat, but it works for more than one character.

@raxforge

Thanks for answering my questions :]

@whalekeeper ohh ok, in other words it could be your character speaking if you want.

although hats are a THING in Mundy’s home world. You do NOT mess with someone’s hat. So it stand to reason he’d be ticked off at them for taking it.

@whalekeeper lol missed that

Crosshair also could’ve been the guy who said “No” to breakfast, although that could easily have been Alpha as well.

That person was addressed by the president as Markus Haziair

@keilah-h

I’m leaving the dialogue up to interpretation. XD Although I have my own idea of who was speaking

Crosshair also could’ve been the guy who said “No” to breakfast, although that could easily have been Alpha as well.

lol could be anybody but it made me think of them

@whalekeeper

“My gun -”

“My original clothes are gone, hat and all. I feel violated.”

Crosshair and Mundy?

@keilah-h @esther-c @lydibug @loopylin @jonas @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @rae @lightoverdarkness6

Warning, everyone… this part is pretty chaotic because everyone is in the same room, trying to figure out what is going on, talking over each other. This is also the exposition part.

Briefing Over…[Read more]