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E. K. Seaver started the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey everyone, so Wings is a story I’m working on (and am probably going to end up having as another serial story on my blog), but I’m struggling with the first little bit. Is it engaging? What do you think of it? Where do you anticipate the story going? How do you feel about the characters?
Critique as brutally (*cough* Dark chocolate *cough*) a…[Read more]
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ella started the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey people!!! I finished my first chapter of Lioness (YA, futuristic speculative fiction), and I’d LOVE it if y’all could read and critique it for me!!! It’s about 2000 words long. And please please please don’t hold back on critiquing–I’m trying to become a better writer so I absolutely need to know what has to change. (
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Kads replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@abigailharder Cool! I really like Aragorn, too. (My sister just likes all the LoTR movies cause she thinks the actors in them are cute *ullllltimate eye-roll*)
Yeah, I’m thinking of painting my room those colours!! 😀
Haha, it’s fine, girl! It’s been for my whole life, so I don’t really know anything outside of the stuff that’s ok for me to…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@abigailharder Oo, I do appreciate normal girls in literature, haha….though mine tend to be boring. Ngl I don’t much about my MCs from the WIP I told you about, haha….I find out more about them as I write…since there’s nine of them I’ll give you the ones I know best for now… There’s a guy, Luona, 25, a police detective who’s severely…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Heyo, and welcome to the Kingdom!!!! 😃 How’s it going? I’m Ella and it’s SO awesome to have you here!!!
A couple of things about me:
1)Â I LOVE smoothies ❤
2)Â I play basketball at my small Christian private school 🏀 and I’m also super in to running 🏃♀️
3)Â I adore Christian hip-hop, some Christian contemporary stuff (Jer…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@abigailharder Ooooh, I love LoTR too!!! I’m currently halfway through The Two Towers! Who is your favourite character from LoTR? I love the elves. They’re really cool. 😀
Heyyy, blue is also my favourite colour! I really love how pastel blue and pastel yellow look paired together.
Homemade mac and cheese? That’s so cool! I’ve actually never had…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@abigailharder What I usually do is just organize them in my brain by place. One I write by hand, another’s going to be a webnovel, another I’m currently plotting, and finally one that I get to when I’m feeling lazy…also it helps when I want to procrastinate. If I don’t want to write one, I write another one, and so on and so forth.
*spins the…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@abigailharder Whoa, I love ice cream, cheesecake, and pie as well! And eyy, team pineapple!
I realise that I never do introduce myself… (probably why my convos always die, haha…)
Anyway, I’m Linyang, a kid about your age, been writing for about 5 or 6 years, and I write fantasy, contemporary fiction, crime, or a mix of both! I’m constantly…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hi Abigail! Awesome to have you here on the forum!
Your three favorite authors are some of my favorites as well! I’ve been reading a lot of C.S. Lewis’s books lately, (mostly non-fiction), with each book I read of his my respect for him as not just an author, but of a person, grows.
Which one of Tolkien’s and which one of C.S.…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@abigailharder Hi there, and welcome to the forum! I see that most everyone has gotten to the questions I want to ask, but let’s see…
What are some of your favorite desserts?
Pineapple on pizza?
Your WIP sounds really interesting! I hope you enjoy your stay here!
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Merie Shen replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hi @abigailharder !
I haven’t been active on these forums for a while (if you can’t already tell, lol) but it’s so good to see you here! Hope you have fun exploring the community 🙂
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Libby replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
It’s so good to meet you, Abigail! We’re so glad that you’ve joined us : )
If I may ask some questions (and please don’t feel obligated to answer!), why do you like to write? Are you looking toward writing as a career, or is it just something you’d rather keep as a hobby? What are some of your favorite things in life? And if…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hi Abigail! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! (My name is Abigail too XD ).
I love fantasy also (actually I write in many genres, but I’ve always loved the use of magical creatures in fantasy:) What’s your WIP’s title? Favorite setting to write in?
Personally, I’ve always liked writing in winter forest-like places:)It’s awesome to have you…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
@abigailharder Hi!! Welcome to the forum!!! I’m Grace. I love writing fantasy, too!! What is your book about? I’m so glad to meet you! Hope you enjoy your start here at Kingdom Pen. It’s such an amazing, welcoming community. <3 Some questions:
What’s your fave book?
What’s your fave color?
What’s your fave food?
Looking forward to getting to…[Read more]